Loyalty: page 16

winzrella on May 13, 2011

I'm not satisfied with this page and there are only very few things I actually like in it. What I hoped to accomplish with the background colors in the last panel did not work…

Oh well, this is for learning to begin with :)

I also have a small problem. I lost my layout plan for this and the next page so I had to replan the text. Now I will also have to do the next page hoping I remember the plan well enough… -.-

Mina_Lunga: Good thing the blue in the flashbacks worked well :)