Thats cause I ran out of room on the paper and had to reuse the drawing of the shadow dog, but the german shepard was completely redrawn for every panel.
Text is hitting the edges of the word bubbles, and there are visable MSPaint erase marks on the outsides of the boxes. And instead of making boxes like you have, have them surround the images, but seperate them, if that makes sense.
Other then that, this is a good effort. Just needs some better MSPaint editing.
kwerty at 7:55AM, Sept. 7, 2006
Thats cause I ran out of room on the paper and had to reuse the drawing of the shadow dog, but the german shepard was completely redrawn for every panel.
buttpropulsion at 10:55PM, Sept. 6, 2006
like the style. reminds me of a dino comic or something that is popular. its like this and has one frmae repeated but different text
lefarce at 10:54PM, Sept. 6, 2006
Text is hitting the edges of the word bubbles, and there are visable MSPaint erase marks on the outsides of the boxes. And instead of making boxes like you have, have them surround the images, but seperate them, if that makes sense. Other then that, this is a good effort. Just needs some better MSPaint editing.
AdHocFerox at 10:29PM, Sept. 6, 2006
cool