Things to fix:
The shading, and no that right there is really
bad shading.
No recolors.
Fix textbox tails.
Get GIMP or Paint.NET there FREE!!! Fix the white space at the bottom.
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Thing to help you:
When resizing NEVER use the mouse or set it at something like 150,250,350 etc. only 200,300,400 etc.
When making the textboxes first make the text then the textbox AROUND the text so then there won't be any empty space (that's what I do).
Look at other people's comic just to see what it should look like (don't copy there style).
Never bit mix EVER (bit mixing is when for example "what you just did in this comic" with the BG and the sprtes).
Here is a good place to get BGs:
1) http://www.bghq.com/
Here are some good places to get sonic sprites:
1) http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/
2) http://www.spriters-resource.com/
3) http://tsgk.captainn.net/?p=news
4) http://www.sprites.friko.pl/sprites.html
And here are some tutorials:
1) http://makingspritecomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/36272/?PHPSESSID=0a872aa4708bb394dd547aa572837492
2) http://www.drunkduck.com/MetroidMaster_Sprite_Comic_Tutorial/
So THAT will help you making sprite comics.
Flame the Hybrid at 2:50PM, Jan. 19, 2007
I'm going to keep an eye on you.
Flame the Hybrid at 2:48PM, Jan. 19, 2007
Things to fix: The shading, and no that right there is really bad shading. No recolors. Fix textbox tails. Get GIMP or Paint.NET there FREE!!! Fix the white space at the bottom. --- Thing to help you: When resizing NEVER use the mouse or set it at something like 150,250,350 etc. only 200,300,400 etc. When making the textboxes first make the text then the textbox AROUND the text so then there won't be any empty space (that's what I do). Look at other people's comic just to see what it should look like (don't copy there style). Never bit mix EVER (bit mixing is when for example "what you just did in this comic" with the BG and the sprtes). Here is a good place to get BGs: 1) http://www.bghq.com/ Here are some good places to get sonic sprites: 1) http://www.themysticalforestzone.com/ 2) http://www.spriters-resource.com/ 3) http://tsgk.captainn.net/?p=news 4) http://www.sprites.friko.pl/sprites.html And here are some tutorials: 1) http://makingspritecomic.smackjeeves.com/comics/36272/?PHPSESSID=0a872aa4708bb394dd547aa572837492 2) http://www.drunkduck.com/MetroidMaster_Sprite_Comic_Tutorial/ So THAT will help you making sprite comics.
ballew57 at 2:15PM, Jan. 19, 2007
? im trying. I dont get it i paste it then it looks terrible
Flame the Hybrid at 2:00PM, Jan. 19, 2007
What the hell, are you using ANY of the advice in any of your comments!!!