okay, the reason i did alot of text is because i don't know how to do animations OR add sound to a comic. I was originally gonna make this an animated segment, but i didn't have the time or budget to do so.
Wow, lots of text. Nice comic, and great effort went into this page, I can tell!
Here's my advice about the bubbles:
The text overlapping is hard to read, but your bubbles are fine- the circle ones, the other text needs bubbles. You may wanna use more of them, make more panels, or do what you need to do, but make sure not to overload one comic with too much text. When I look at the last panel, I see this huge wall of text. I hope the advice helps, and remember its just my opinion, you don't have to take my advice.
I'm going to favorite this comic, because I really like what I see so far, and it seems to me to be very very interesting! You do a nice job! +5
Alright dude, your comic's got a LOT going on. Mostly with the dialog, I won't even scheme through it, you should upgrade your text boxes. I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, just trying to help.
Zoras at 2:26PM, Oct. 12, 2010
okay, the reason i did alot of text is because i don't know how to do animations OR add sound to a comic. I was originally gonna make this an animated segment, but i didn't have the time or budget to do so.
Auragongal at 7:45AM, July 21, 2010
Wait, there are rules?
TBustah at 9:16PM, July 20, 2010
Are you high, Ettie? This guy is breaking just about every rule in the book.
Ettie at 5:14PM, July 20, 2010
Wow, lots of text. Nice comic, and great effort went into this page, I can tell! Here's my advice about the bubbles: The text overlapping is hard to read, but your bubbles are fine- the circle ones, the other text needs bubbles. You may wanna use more of them, make more panels, or do what you need to do, but make sure not to overload one comic with too much text. When I look at the last panel, I see this huge wall of text. I hope the advice helps, and remember its just my opinion, you don't have to take my advice. I'm going to favorite this comic, because I really like what I see so far, and it seems to me to be very very interesting! You do a nice job! +5
KademonsterX at 4:33PM, July 20, 2010
Alright dude, your comic's got a LOT going on. Mostly with the dialog, I won't even scheme through it, you should upgrade your text boxes. I'm not trying to be a dick or anything, just trying to help.