Chapter One: Page 20
Doctor Shadow on April 13, 2008
Now you get to see the street scene from closer to the tavern, time has indeed moved on and there are a fair few details to make you, some of them correlate from the original long-shot scene of the same street.
See what you can find!
Also: poor Scar, missed those two ladies again ;)
Reitei at 11:18AM, July 31, 2008
Someone appears to want to steal patti's buns agian... ... that sounds wrong.
katyas at 12:10PM, May 22, 2008
Well, finally used a Siamese cat, so whomever was complaining about that a few pages ago - there you are. Heh. And both the barmaid AND Muntron are in on the plot, eh? Poor Scar, he just can't win for losing, can he?
Doctor Shadow at 4:39AM, April 20, 2008
Adam: You've seen those gals before ;)
Adam Black at 7:50PM, April 17, 2008
Mmm...twins in garters. You guys did that just for me, didn't you? Of course you did. ;)
JustNoPoint at 2:14PM, April 16, 2008
This is a crazy good scene. So much activity and hot twins! What more could I ask for?
Doctor Shadow at 3:20AM, April 15, 2008
Muntron: thanks, it's nice to be able to team-up with her like this.
Muntron at 2:59AM, April 15, 2008
The small background things going on make it all so much more realistic. Reva + Fenris = Awesome Comicness
Doctor Shadow at 2:21AM, April 15, 2008
Midge: Reva says thanks. If you look at the earlier street scene, you'll see that there are elements in this one from that.
TheMidge28 at 4:52PM, April 14, 2008
well done on constructing that street scene.
Doctor Shadow at 3:38PM, April 14, 2008
amanda: heh, yeah, it means we use more pages but I think it works quite well. Faolin: Awww, poor Jacob indeed! steak: his bark is only +3 trevora: thanks Steely: It can take a few hours to do something like that.
Doctor Shadow at 3:37PM, April 14, 2008
Peipei: Thanks! DAJB: Yeah, Reva's done a good job on this one. Loud_G: Many thanks amigo! ttyler: This cat is plotting /something/!
Steely Gaze at 11:43AM, April 14, 2008
What a detailed scene. I can't really imagine how long it must have taken to draw; the little touches make it come alive, and help draw me into this believable world. Also, I love Scar in the last panel; he looks brooding and defiant, yet also somewhat hollow, as though he knows this defiance will not truly happen. That's my take on it anyway. Keep it up!
killersteak at 10:25AM, April 14, 2008
Dog used Bark. It wasn't very effective.
Starwolf at 10:01AM, April 14, 2008
Wow.... just wow.
Faolin at 8:59AM, April 14, 2008
Okay, first I gotta say, awesome street scene. I love the activity in the scene and as always, I love Reva's work. Secondly, I said last week (probably to myself) and I'll say it again, Aw, poor Scaro. Lastly, I've been asking about the nosy man with the weird pipe, but if I'm not mistaken, I should have been asking about the barmaid. Can't wait for the next page!
amanda at 8:38AM, April 14, 2008
*clap clap* More horses! I love how Reva is portraying time passing, and I heartily second Loud_G's comment. I can relate completely to Scar here - I'll do as I'm told or be a pushover, but the whole time, I'm thinking just what he's thinking. One day, I'll say no.
ttyler at 7:30AM, April 14, 2008
I agree, the town shot is great! Theres another cat under the table....plotting to do in that dog no doubt. I love how you have the main character thinking in a different Dialogue box, so it is specific to him and his thoughts. Another great page.
Loud_G at 5:40AM, April 14, 2008
You two are doing such a great job! I absolutely love how the town is ALIVE. Things are going on in the background, people are talking. All as if life were really going on while the story progresses. Great work!
DAJB at 3:42AM, April 14, 2008
Heh - just love all the detail in this!
Peipei at 2:57AM, April 14, 2008
Very well done :)