Chapter One: Page 32
Doctor Shadow on May 24, 2008
I had quite a bit of fun with the dialogue in this part. I always liked writing for Talon. He amuses me and he's the eternal jester, even if his life's in danger or something very bad's about to happen.
But you can always count on him to do the right thing in the end!
harkovast at 3:33PM, Nov. 27, 2008
Ah darn, he was bluffing!
Muntron at 2:57AM, June 2, 2008
Damn good!
Doctor Shadow at 5:16AM, May 29, 2008
Is this the event that's going to change his outlook regarding being that 'lady's man'?
katyas at 12:53PM, May 28, 2008
BWAHAHAHA! You would have had a spit-take if I had just taken a drink of my Coke - luckily I'd already swallowed it down. Hehe. "Even if I am wrong, I look damn good regardless" *snicker* I love it ... What's not to love? No wonder he's a lady's man!
Doctor Shadow at 3:34PM, May 27, 2008
trevora: thanks! Stig: Heh heh heh
Stig Hemmer at 2:28PM, May 27, 2008
Had me worried there...
Doctor Shadow at 2:56AM, May 27, 2008
Steely: Yep, he's pretty likeable. amanda: Modesty isn't a word Talon understands *grin* Midge: thanks man.
Doctor Shadow at 2:45AM, May 27, 2008
Adam: Oh, they're around somewhere :)
amanda at 5:55PM, May 26, 2008
No shortage of modesty there.
Steely Gaze at 4:01PM, May 26, 2008
Ha, ha! I love Talon's dialog! He's just so flippant and flamboyant it's hard to hate him. As he noted, even when he messes up, he still does it with style.
Adam Black at 1:31PM, May 26, 2008
Woo hoo! Finally caught up! Great story so far...but where are those twins?!? ;)
Doctor Shadow at 4:37AM, May 26, 2008
Thanks! Also, DAJB: Yes! it's about time he did charge in to the rescue *grin* JNP: Always, he wouldn't be Talon Mane, if he didn't :>
DAJB at 1:27AM, May 26, 2008
To the rescue!
JustNoPoint at 6:51PM, May 25, 2008
And he does so in the merriest of moods!