Chapter One: Page 35
Doctor Shadow on June 3, 2008
When Talon says, there's ‘Quite an Adventure to be had’ you just know that something's going to go wrong. So does he, he lives for ‘seat of the pants’ type flying as well as that kind of plan. He's not exactly what you'd call a methodical man, unless of course it's down to chasing women.
Apart from the gorgeous woman right before his eye.
harkovast at 3:35PM, Nov. 27, 2008
Alright, he's winning me back again. He better do some fantastically heroic stuff though!
Muntron at 1:22AM, June 13, 2008
His eye patch never ceases to be awesome.
JustNoPoint at 6:37PM, June 9, 2008
Ah shoot em up. My answer as well!
Doctor Shadow at 1:34PM, June 6, 2008
Heh, the update times are Monday/Thursday, but DD has a habit of borking at certain times (12:08 GMT) that means you might actually miss an update since it kind of forgets. Always check Monday/Thursday, and sometimes I'm sneaky and I put in updates in-between.
katyas at 12:37PM, June 6, 2008
Y'know, I checked the DD several times on Wednesday, and this never showed as having an update. I just noticed the date on it today and said "ah HA update, scurrilous rouge of an update button didn't tell me about!!!" Or something along those lines. I am rather groggy, so it might not have been as clear-cut a thought as that ... Love this page - Talon's all like "Wheee!! Let's go in, gun's a'blazin'! Live fast, die young and leave a beautiful corpse!" and Silver is like *shaking head* "you're an idiot, you know that right? I love you anyway, so I'll back your play"
Steely Gaze at 4:21PM, June 5, 2008
Ah Talon, you always do things the hard way, don't you? :) I like his expression in the last panel. It's very...roguish. Personally, I wouldn't be all that likely to trust anyone involved with the Church, no matter who they were. Especially if I was a man like Talon.
Reva Flynn at 9:02AM, June 5, 2008
Hi Midge! I appreciate the thought there. I'm actually still learning as a comic artist, my main area has been rpg illustration for a good few years now, so I'm still very much breaking myself in with regard to telling a story via a comic, so any good examples etc would be much appreciated!
Doctor Shadow at 3:37AM, June 5, 2008
DAJB: Heh, hehehe, hehehehe, I love that pose.
Doctor Shadow at 3:10AM, June 5, 2008
Midge: The dialogue and the writing is all me, as for art, I really can't comment so I'll have to wait for Reva to answer this one :)
Doctor Shadow at 3:05AM, June 5, 2008
amanda: It was intimated in the Characters: Silver, entry. Silver is fond enough of Talon but she won't wait around forever, nor will she actually make any kind of move in his direction. Not whilst he's off with those other lasses.
DAJB at 1:17AM, June 5, 2008
Heh - you can just feel Silver's shoulders sagging as he cheerfully proposes wading right in ... again! Nice characterisation!
TheMidge28 at 5:07PM, June 4, 2008
I love the dialogue. the dry whit and carefree attitude of Talon. have a question on art: your outdoor scenes are amazing but the angle seems always straight on the characters. have thought of trying to change up the angles on the scene from differing perspectives? not trying to be overly critical. just throwing some ideas out there.
amanda at 4:08PM, June 4, 2008
Hmm, clever to have a code word/phrase. Am I reading the last line in the notes correctly that she likes him and her love goes unrequited? Or am I assuming too much? I guess finding out she likes him would be...surprising.