Chapter Two: Page 12
Doctor Shadow on July 16, 2008
So, we let you fill in the blanks of what truly happened the night before and now it's morning again. The Church Windship is getting closer to Sullavale and as the sun breaks over the sleepy couple Darian learns exactly what it was that Cryssa was up to last night, needless to say, he should have expected it.
The word of the day is: Melon, say it with her: MELON!
Edit: We also got featured! I couldn't have done it without all of you guys and gals, as well as the talented Reva Flynn so don't forget to give her some loooove as well!
DOOM Chan at 3:33AM, Sept. 11, 2008
The scratches where a nice touch.
Muntron at 2:47AM, July 25, 2008
Teehee , she looks very vicious in that last panel.
Doctor Shadow at 5:38AM, July 20, 2008
roy: evil is indeed good :) leleath: thank you and welcome to Wyrden.
leleath at 5:34AM, July 20, 2008
Giggle, I find your story very intresting. ^_^ I'll enjoy reading this I think.
royduncan100 at 6:13AM, July 19, 2008
evil good
Doctor Shadow at 8:19AM, July 18, 2008
Shady One: I'm glad you picked up on that, it speaks volumes about what kind of people these pair really are.
Shady One at 7:34AM, July 18, 2008
You know, of all the brilliant things about this page, I have to say my favorite is the understated, unmentioned, claw marks on his back. The way they are both so used to them says something about them, never mind the rest of the conversation really lets you get a feel for the characters.
Doctor Shadow at 1:25AM, July 18, 2008
slimredninja: thanks, hope you stick around because we've got some great things planned. Action, adventure, you name it!
slimredninja at 1:16AM, July 18, 2008
Really great looking comic you got here. great story to! congrats on being featured
Doctor Shadow at 12:57AM, July 18, 2008
Adam: HAHAHA! katyas: many many thanks :), as for the fingernails, well, it's a useful talent for making a point (or more) harry: thanks, glad you're liking it alejkhan: thanks! Sonusai: heh, thankee!
Sonusai at 11:18PM, July 17, 2008
Mazel Tov!! Oh, and I'm going to say it with you, The word of the day is officially, Melon.
alejkhan at 7:16PM, July 17, 2008
Congratulations on being featured. Good stories always get their due eventually!
harryq at 5:29PM, July 17, 2008
... and the excellence continues!
katyas at 11:08AM, July 17, 2008
You SOO deserve that feature, too! Congratulations! Or as those of us who are friends to rats say, congRATulations! ;-) I sure do wish I could make my fingernails grow suddenly like that! But I'd probably just break THOSE off, too, like I do the ones I DO manage to grow myself ... Heh
Adam Black at 10:44AM, July 17, 2008
Way ahead of you, Cryssa! Melons have been on my mind for the past couple of pages now. :D
Doctor Shadow at 10:16AM, July 17, 2008
DAJB: Thanks!
DAJB at 9:09AM, July 17, 2008
Ah, there's nothing quite like a comely pillow (or two!) is there? And, hey - congrats on the feature, both of you! Well deserved and no surprise to anyone, I'm sure! Now let's all go melon-splitting to celebrate!
Doctor Shadow at 7:59AM, July 17, 2008
trevora: thanks, yeah, he's not phased in the slightest. He's probably done similar when he was a lot younger. stranger: Thanks, yep, he had a brief introduction to why he should have quit whilst he was ahead when he ran away from Scar. amanda: Thankee, I love that last panel too :)
Reva Flynn at 7:58AM, July 17, 2008
Thankyou for all the comments and support:) I have to say it is madly exciting to be featured:D And now because I can.... "Melons!"
amanda at 7:43AM, July 17, 2008
Well-deserved feature, you two. Excellent job! Last panel ftw!
thefightingstranger at 7:34AM, July 17, 2008
Congrats on the feature. Heh, and the lesson was a brief one for the melon man.
trevoramueller at 7:31AM, July 17, 2008
Congrats on the feature! You totally deserve it, with the sheer amount of talent that have been coming through on your pages - both in art and writing! It's good that we get some more information from this character about her "nocturnal activities," and it also shows us more about these two characters relationships - like the fact that he's not fazed at all by hearing about her killing people at night.
Doctor Shadow at 7:30AM, July 17, 2008
albone: Thanks! And you could be right, if you missed the filler. Here: [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Chronicles_of_Wyrden/index.php?p=432740]Nightshade and Darian[/url] it has some background on the pair. Also there's some history that's not been described (yet)
albone at 7:25AM, July 17, 2008
Congratulations on the feature! Brilliantly done. :) Very cool page too, pretty direct conversation for morning after talk. Probably not their first 'morning-after,' eh?
Doctor Shadow at 6:17AM, July 17, 2008
Sandy: Cheers! tim: dude, thanks! Fly: Heh, well, she did split him like one. Starwolf: thanks! JnP: Many thanks! Steely: Thanks, I'm sure Reva'll pop in and comment as well, but I wanted to address these comments right now. Also, yeah, intense would be about right!