Adam Black at 10:29PM, Aug. 3, 2008

The moral of today's story is: Don't do the bidding of the Church! You'll have more fun that way.

royduncan100 at 7:30PM, Aug. 1, 2008

What makes me ay that,A GUT FEELING!

Doctor Shadow at 2:05AM, Aug. 1, 2008

roy: what makes you think that? Sonusai: Definitely time for the dramatic music, something wicked this way comes!

Sonusai at 9:01PM, July 31, 2008

Dun da dun dun DUN!

royduncan100 at 8:23PM, July 31, 2008

someone is lying in the bunch,I think!

Doctor Shadow at 5:45PM, July 31, 2008

trevora: Go back to the original page that Scar sneaks out of Leyland's manor on. It says: Freedom :) Fao: heh, the church knows but they won't advertise they lost their lapdog.

Faolin at 1:07PM, July 31, 2008

Yay! Finally the plan starts to unfold. Odd question though, does the Church know that they don't have Kalon under their bootheel? :)

trevoramueller at 1:06PM, July 31, 2008

Okay, maybe I have to go back a page or two, but what does that writing on the wall say?

Doctor Shadow at 9:42AM, July 31, 2008

Yeah Steely, now you say that I can actually spot that mistake. So it's been rectified, thanks for catching it buddy :)

Azarr at 9:36AM, July 31, 2008

You are indeed correct, Steely.

Steely Gaze at 9:07AM, July 31, 2008

No, I'm sorry, I didn't mean an exclamation point, I meant an apostrophe. Kalon says "churches" not "church's", isn't the latter the correct way he should say it? The way it's written seems to imply more than one church, when I assumed he was talking about the Church of Progression as a single entity. Of course, I taught myself to write with little to no formal education, so I could be entirely wrong.

Doctor Shadow at 8:24AM, July 31, 2008

thefightingstranger: You could be right, it's based on one of our cats so anything is possible!

thefightingstranger at 8:20AM, July 31, 2008

I still think that cat is going to jump on him.

Doctor Shadow at 7:59AM, July 31, 2008

amanda: Morgan has his own symbol, if you remember :) You might learn just what that is.

amanda at 7:52AM, July 31, 2008

There's a bird on that other wall, kitty. GET IT! Hmm. Shouldn't Morgan also have a coat in order to fully pull off the Church look? Or will he not be face-to-face with Keys?

Doctor Shadow at 7:42AM, July 31, 2008

steak: Indeed!

killersteak at 7:20AM, July 31, 2008

Todays word of the day is: BOOTHEEL!

Doctor Shadow at 6:34AM, July 31, 2008

Steely: The ! would emphasise that more, but it would become too forceful. The bidding is meant to hang in the air, as if unfinished, as if Kalon wants to say more but his mind refuses to let him elaborate.

Steely Gaze at 6:30AM, July 31, 2008

Just a thought, but I think you might be missing an apostrophe where Kalon says he "no longer does the church(')s bidding". So basically, it's time to lie and scare the crap out of fat old Leyland? Hmm, works for me! :D

Doctor Shadow at 5:51AM, July 31, 2008

katyas: nothing to say! I'm shocked *grin* thanks hon! Starwolf: thank you! Loud_G: Coming soon, action-a-plenty! And rogueish Sky Pirates (who are not...Talon and his crew)!

Loud_G at 5:40AM, July 31, 2008

I can just feel some exiting events about to happen with this little group. :D

Doctor Shadow at 4:20AM, July 31, 2008

DAJB: Oh yeah, sneaky is Kalon's middle name, or is that Morgan's? tim: thanks man :) M0Rgan: many thanks Azarr: cheers :)

ttyler at 2:13AM, July 31, 2008

Nice dialogue.

DAJB at 1:19AM, July 31, 2008

Oooh, they're such a sneaky bunch!