Chapter Two: Page 30

Doctor Shadow on Sept. 14, 2008

Some of you asked for it, some of you might have expected it, but there's a moment once in a while where characters deviate from the script that you planned. This is one of them, Scar just plainly got fedup and on Saturday afternoon, Reva said to me with a wicked gleam in her eye: I think you need to re-write some of your script.

I wonder what Kalon will say?

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Doctor Shadow at 1:54AM, Sept. 17, 2008

trevora: messy, messy, messy pup! Starwolf: thanks :)

trevoramueller at 11:39AM, Sept. 16, 2008

Oh snap! Brain matter everywhere!

Doctor Shadow at 2:06AM, Sept. 16, 2008

Adam: You know it! albone: Someone's going to be annoyed when they find all the dead ;) amanda: To every action, there's an equal and opposite reaction. I'm looking at those guards there... Loud_G: They're going to be very interesting. katyas: The payoff is worth the hassle! Stig: He should have definitely shut up, Scar so wanted to pull the trigger ages ago.

Doctor Shadow at 2:02AM, Sept. 16, 2008

Jean: *grins* M0rgan: thanks Harry: It happens quite a bit with my characters, sneaky buggers always going off the rails! stranger: Go on, you know you want to! steak: harsh, but fair. Steely: It depends what they do, I mean Scar just gunned down their boss. Someone's going to make a mistake, react badly...these things have a habit of escalating. Azarr: Quite true!

Stig Hemmer at 2:09PM, Sept. 15, 2008

I think that was the wrong order to give, gov.

katyas at 10:51AM, Sept. 15, 2008

d'oh! Go Scar, but that probably wasn't the best move to be making ... you have NOTHING to barter your way out of this with now ... Oh, well - seeing fat-arse's head go boom was worth it!

Loud_G at 9:33AM, Sept. 15, 2008

Woo! Excellent! Great shot and great turn in the story.I cannot wait to see the repercussions for this event :)

Reva Flynn at 9:01AM, Sept. 15, 2008

I am so proud of Scar;) Seriously, I really tried to stick to the script, but....the characters wanted this.....

amanda at 8:41AM, Sept. 15, 2008

Wooooo! I love when characters develop themselves to a point where you have to rewrite the script. That's when you know your characters have depth ^.^ Realistically speaking, this is a very Scar-ish move. Hope the consequences aren't TOO dire...

albone at 8:37AM, Sept. 15, 2008

And some say heroics and stupidity are the same thing! Oh man, I can only think this is the beginning of some serious drama.

Adam Black at 7:11AM, Sept. 15, 2008

Uh oh! It's gonna get hairy now.

Azarr at 5:34AM, Sept. 15, 2008

Interesting.... now the question is: How will the guards react? Will they just stare in shock? Or will they perhaps panic and shoot? Or something entirely different perhaps? Oh and I think Leyland crossed the line some time ago and hasn't stopped yet... Well I suppose he was just stopped.

Steely Gaze at 4:21AM, Sept. 15, 2008

Ouch! Brain-blasting gory goodness. Icky.... Well, Scar has been pushed over the edge. Now methinks those guards at the door may reconsider their actions. Nothing too brash now, not only do they have a cat, but they've got a crazy man on their side. ;)