Chapter Three: Page 27
Doctor Shadow on Jan. 7, 2009
Inquisitor Avala is excellent at investigation, she can join the dots very well. This continues my experimentation with silent pages and showcases Reva's excellent art. I think this is one of my favourite updates to date.
Doctor Shadow at 5:02AM, Jan. 10, 2009
Loud_G: Inquisitorial training prepares you for this and more. ttyler: remember the perfect shot that Kalon performed? trevora: cheers dude Starwolf: our thanks! Adam: Damnit man, you made us blush! Thanks!
Adam Black at 11:40PM, Jan. 9, 2009
Excellent panel progression. Pat Reva on the back for me. And you, too, for being one of those writers comfortable enough to let the art tell the story every now and then. :)
ttyler at 6:28AM, Jan. 9, 2009
Nice silent page. It actually adds more to the mysterious object she has dicovered.
Loud_G at 5:23AM, Jan. 9, 2009
She is showing remarkable reserve. I would have been flipping out all over the place. :D
Doctor Shadow at 4:58AM, Jan. 9, 2009
M0rgan: thanks
Doctor Shadow at 4:57AM, Jan. 9, 2009
Steely: As they say, a picture is worth a thousand words. This will be the trend for Wyrden, less narration, more of Reva's great art and of course dialogue where dialogue is needed. As for CSI's, well, each agent of the Church of Progression is trained to sift a crime scene for clues. So there probably isn't a dedicated CSI division for the CoP.
Steely Gaze at 12:57PM, Jan. 8, 2009
Lovely close-ups, and the last panel is just excellent. This continues the silent buildup of the last few pages nicely. Hestonia probably doesn't have any crime scene investigators, which is a blessing for them, because I can't imagine anyone who would want to shift through this mess!
Doctor Shadow at 10:27AM, Jan. 8, 2009
Crimson: thanks, Reva will be pleased! ipokino: In some cases the women have more power than the men. It's a world of various degrees. It really depends where you're from in Hestonia. Zeph: thanks! amanda: Good, bad? It's all the same coin.
amanda at 10:08AM, Jan. 8, 2009
Oooh, she's sharp. She might be one of the bad guys, but I like her already!
ipokino at 7:11AM, Jan. 8, 2009
At least the women in this world appear to be able to be accepted as equals to males...this is a good sign!
Crimsonskystudio at 6:47AM, Jan. 8, 2009
Great work on this page
Doctor Shadow at 4:56AM, Jan. 8, 2009
Azarr: thanks! harry: Yeah, could be a bullet fragment from earlier!
harryq at 3:36AM, Jan. 8, 2009
Ah... a clue!