Chapter Four: Page 22
Doctor Shadow on May 3, 2009
I absolutely love Scar's expression in the last panel, for once he actually looks as though he's about to take no prisoners. Of course if you remember his actions in Bell Alley, that guy is quite capable of doing just that.
He seems to have someone to give a damn about now as well.
darkwaterfrey at 12:08PM, May 6, 2009
Lovely comic! Now I'll have to go through the archives!
Adam Black at 10:51AM, May 6, 2009
Scar is 100% Manly.
ghostrunner at 10:44PM, May 4, 2009
beautiful as ever
Doctor Shadow at 4:13PM, May 4, 2009
Repoman: Thanks, Reva really appreciated that comment and so did I. Zeph, Azarr: Thanks for reading. albone: Thanks for spotting that, I completely missed it when I wrote it down from my original script and copied it into the update. It was origianlly a full stop. Starwolf, trevora: thanks!
albone at 12:38PM, May 4, 2009
Scar has his shit together, so he's focused. Go some ladies to be protecting. ;) Nit-pick here, but I think in the last panel, grammatically you need a period after wanted. Or if you added 'and' to join the two, otherwise its a long run-on sentence. Take the nit-pick for what its worth. ;)
repoman at 11:19AM, May 4, 2009
I really like the ink washes on this page. The whites, grays, and darks really blend together nicely. Panel two especially has a nice range of values that seperate the figures and back/fore ground elements.
Doctor Shadow at 9:10AM, May 4, 2009
tim: thanks! M0rgan: cheers! Loud_G: I'm sure he'd appreciate it. amanda: Isadora is a moody woman at the best of times. DAJB: Aye, it's about time too!
DAJB at 9:07AM, May 4, 2009
Scar taking the situation well in hand. Good for him!
amanda at 8:50AM, May 4, 2009
I like Scar when he has someone to protect. I mean, this is essentially the same goal as the beginning, but he was all a-fluster when the ladies weren't tangible ^.^ Isadora doesn't seem too thrilled by the couple, though. Then again, maybe she's always the scowling sort, haha.
Loud_G at 4:22AM, May 4, 2009
Fancy Elevator, Scar, good luck with the ladies :)
ttyler at 3:30AM, May 4, 2009
Well designed page. Nice character placement.