Chapter Four: Page 25

Doctor Shadow on May 13, 2009

The verbal game of cat and mouse seems to be ongoing here. Of course when you see these pair cut loose, that'll be something for their enemies to fear. Silver and Kalon in combat would be a terrible thing for their foes.

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khard12 at 12:27PM, May 21, 2009

Those 2 needs to quit playing games and just kiss (or something).

ttyler at 11:20PM, May 14, 2009

Great!!! I luv me some secrets!!!

Doctor Shadow at 3:07PM, May 14, 2009

Azarr, Midge, Zeph: thanks for reading! Adam: Is there? Threeeyeswurm: cheers, I seee Reva answered the art bit. amanda: thank you :) repoman: Yeah, they're very formal about a lot of things those pair. Starwolf: thankee.

repoman at 1:55PM, May 14, 2009

I like how they are so formal when addressing each other.

amanda at 1:03PM, May 14, 2009

I really appreciate how they don't just automatically tell each other everything - I see that a lot in other stories/comics, but people with realistic reactions to one another is hard to come by and that much more valuable. No worries, Reva - keeping panels interesting for conversations is a really difficult thing, but you do just fine ^.^

Reva Flynn at 12:16PM, May 14, 2009

Hiyas! I'm sorry I can't flip panels or the buildings behind her would be in the wrong location. I'm still learning how to draw interesting conversations, so just bear with me;)

threeeyeswurm at 11:13AM, May 14, 2009

Nice dialogue man. May I suggest flipping panel two so that the Lady faces Kalon? It would give the audience a better sense that she is facing him.

Adam Black at 10:52AM, May 14, 2009

There's a romance brewing here. I just know it.

Doctor Shadow at 5:42AM, May 14, 2009

ghost: thanks! M0rgan: thanks for stopping by. Ryu: cheers! DAJB: I'd say so! harry: A little from shelf A and B. albone: Isn't that supposed to be: you'd do Lady Danae? Net: Thanks for reading!