Chapter Five: Page 6
Doctor Shadow on June 3, 2009
Well…for those of you on Talon's side (and who really isn't?) finally, Talon lets rip with a full broadside of smackdown. Oooh, look at Izzy's face!
HAH!
Thanks to our readers old and new and thanks to people who spot the odd typo and give us advice, it's more than welcome.
Cheers.
A slight edit was suggested by a good friend of mine. I quite like it as well, you get to see more of Talon's cheeky expression that's no longer covered up too.
One for da ladies!
Doctor Shadow at 4:12AM, June 6, 2009
Zeph, Crimson: thank you! Khard: Nope, he wouldn't mind watching her at all. darkwaterfrey: Heh, definitely a loud verbal smack. repo: thanks! Fao: cheers :) Starwolf, Azarr, M0rgan: thanks folks :) DAJB: You won't be saying that when you see Arabella ;) JNP: cheers!
DAJB at 12:35AM, June 5, 2009
Heh - Izzy may have been put in her place but, given their role in all this, I can't help thinking the girls are looking a little too pleased with themselves. Shameless hussies! Send them my way! ;-)
Faolin at 2:18PM, June 4, 2009
Aw, poor Izzy. It looks like Talon is the only one with the guts to say something. Nice to see Scar and the girls enjoying it. :) Awesome page.
repoman at 2:09PM, June 4, 2009
Excellent writing. And I'm still digging the "smokey" art style.
darkwaterfrey at 11:14AM, June 4, 2009
ooooooooh! SMACK!!!
khard12 at 10:21AM, June 4, 2009
You were right Doc, I have to sit back down in order to stand again in awe of Talon's awesomeness. Looks like Scar and the girls are enjoying the repartee a little more than Izzy. (I have a feeling Talon better keep an eye on Izzy from here on out. She looks the vengeful type to me.)(Not that Talon would mind watching her ;)
Doctor Shadow at 7:53AM, June 4, 2009
ghost: thanks! Ryu: cheers! Midge: Talon quite simply had enough. Net: Scar and Mercedes are laughing madly (according to Reva) Adam: Yep...she's not going to recover from that in a hurry.
Adam Black at 7:18AM, June 4, 2009
The verbal fencing match ends in a fatal thrust to the pride of Izzy.
Net at 6:02AM, June 4, 2009
Hmm, not 100% sure what's happening in the 4th panel... they're laughing at the situation? I think? :) Damn you logic, how dare you interject into her argument! :p hehee >Net
TheMidge28 at 4:47AM, June 4, 2009
lovely smackish-downish of the lady-folk!
Ryuthehedgewolf at 3:28AM, June 4, 2009
Great work!
ghostrunner at 2:46AM, June 4, 2009
:)