Oh, Anke, I didn't mean that comment to sound mean! I'm sorry, that came out wrong! I meant it in a hah hah laughing at myself kind of way, not a "thanks for nothing" kind of way.
I'm sorry, I completely forget that inflection doesn't come across over the internet.
Um, you do know that the perspective is a bit off, particularly in the last panel?
The top of the door is about level with the horizon, so Jimmy is way taller than the door here.
Very nice work on the bike and characters, though.
First three panels are awesome. But I can see if you feel a bit down about the next two. The backgrounds don't feel as "strong" like they do in the last panel. I think it might be because the character is just smack dab in the middle but in that last one he is slightly off center.
jiminycricketX at 3:46PM, Nov. 3, 2009
Oh, Anke, I didn't mean that comment to sound mean! I'm sorry, that came out wrong! I meant it in a hah hah laughing at myself kind of way, not a "thanks for nothing" kind of way. I'm sorry, I completely forget that inflection doesn't come across over the internet.
Anke at 11:14AM, May 27, 2009
Well, since you did the same thing in the last page and said that turned out well, I thought I'd point it out. Sorry I tried to help you.
jiminycricketX at 5:52AM, May 24, 2009
I AM aware of how off the perspective is Anke. Did you miss the part where I said 'I'm really not happy with this page, lke, at all?'
Anke at 2:14AM, May 24, 2009
Um, you do know that the perspective is a bit off, particularly in the last panel? The top of the door is about level with the horizon, so Jimmy is way taller than the door here. Very nice work on the bike and characters, though.
Modesty at 8:49AM, May 22, 2009
First three panels are awesome. But I can see if you feel a bit down about the next two. The backgrounds don't feel as "strong" like they do in the last panel. I think it might be because the character is just smack dab in the middle but in that last one he is slightly off center.
ghostrunner at 10:21PM, May 21, 2009
i dunno, looks good to me