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Singring on Nov. 29, 2010
I had fun drawing this one, though getting the perspective right on the last panel was tough. The first panel features my first attempt at habing a sequence of body movements represented in one panel. I decided to illustrate that by drawing the first and last stages of the sequence normally (i.e. line inks, shading etc.) but reducing the intermediate stages to basic shaded outlines. Hope its possible to make out what is going on.
cyberdog at 9:27AM, Dec. 3, 2010
The last panel is amazing (well all of it is), I really like the detail and the perspective.
Singring at 5:16AM, Dec. 1, 2010
I agree that its a problem DAJB. I'll try that with the next page and based on the results maybe scale back the others too. Thanks!
DAJB at 12:25AM, Dec. 1, 2010
Gorgeous artwork! As a suggestion, though, many of the pages require side-scrolling. I'd reduce the page-width to maybe 700 pixels to be sure everything fits on the screen. Maybe a little higher. It would be worth experimenting, I think.
demontales at 6:53AM, Nov. 30, 2010
Gorgeous page