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Vie on May 21, 2010
I'm trying sometthing new with the speach bubbles. I think it will be easier in the long run to characterize each bubble with who says it. Please, tell me what you think :) I appreciate constructive criticism
Vie on May 21, 2010
I'm trying sometthing new with the speach bubbles. I think it will be easier in the long run to characterize each bubble with who says it. Please, tell me what you think :) I appreciate constructive criticism
DJLink at 9:17PM, May 22, 2010
Really like that last panel.
CoyoteLongshot at 8:08PM, May 22, 2010
I really like this so far! The fantastical art style is really drawing me in. I'm gonna keep an eye on this one!
G D at 7:02PM, May 22, 2010
Awesome colours.
Luccia at 6:46PM, May 22, 2010
Wait, the speech bubbles. Do you mean certain characters have certain colors? Yeah, that'd work. :)
Luccia at 6:34PM, May 22, 2010
Aw. He looks so cute in the last panel
I Am The 1337 Master at 6:30PM, May 22, 2010
LOVE IT!
I Am The 1337 Master at 6:22PM, May 22, 2010
I. [b]LOVE!!![/b] THIS!!! [b]LOVE IT!!![/b] Definitely will get reccommended by me. And I want you to get featured.
Gavriel at 6:19PM, May 22, 2010
Cool commic, but I don't understand why the trees are creating her. Why would they want to stop the nightmares?
covered in bees at 5:41PM, May 22, 2010
the art in this comic is so wonderfully beautiful. i look forward to the next update
The Satoshi at 5:33PM, May 22, 2010
Love the tenticles sprouting from the ground! So much fun!!
Desiree Joy at 4:40PM, May 22, 2010
Love your colors, and how you use the solid silhouette it really adds drama.