Issue 01red - Page 01
JustNoPoint on Oct. 30, 2013
Long time DD members may actually remember some of these pages from back in 2010 when I 1st started updating issue 1 of the story proper.
Some things have been altered as my story has changed a bit.
The explosion here originates from Prologue.
If you don't feel like going back and seeing what took place in
Prologue, I believe everything will be decently explained in both sides
of issue 1. At least that's my hope.
I reduced the font by 1 point. It's still 1 point larger than it was in
Prologue. I do hope it is not too small. Please let me know if it is!
If you see a way to improve dialogue for my British characters please let me know that as well. I'll ninja edit it in! xD
I'm asking for cameos too. Details here
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Vickie: Well, Quantum Leap is a HUGE influence in the method of time travel for sure. So I may have had Ziggy in mind in the recap voice as well ;) I have to catch myself from using the term “leap” within the comic.
MIB: Thanks!
Asbin: He really shouldn't have tried those shrooms at the rave party!
Peipei at 12:24PM, Oct. 31, 2013
What a scary world they live in. They can actually see the ships exploding xD
usedbooks at 9:18PM, Oct. 30, 2013
Typo. Last speech bubble. ;) Aside from that, nice scene-establishing page. (And thanks for the nod. You help me more than I help you. Heh.)
Jamie59 at 8:59PM, Oct. 30, 2013
Hay it's a mechanic shop.
Szyszka666 at 2:04PM, Oct. 30, 2013
I wonder how the World looks like in 2132 from Your perspective :)
man in black at 12:37PM, Oct. 30, 2013
great page