Issue 01red - Page 02
JustNoPoint on Oct. 31, 2013
http://devonlegacy.com
Look, it's Nyra Cavanta! Pretty much the only character that you'll have
already seen from the Prologue in this half of the issue!
Man, if she's reporting at 7AM London time then she's up at 3AM New York
City time. I wonder if she's slept any at all during the whole alien
debacle?!
And before anyone yells at me for not using the word recurring… I know ^^
This page may be a lot to process, and took forever. GIA is on the scene
as always. Very diverse people with very typical names =p You want your
public image to be a good one. Though I have to wonder how well
Thompson helps their image… dude's freaky looking.
And Happy Halloween!
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MIB: Thanks!
Szyszka: Well you can find out a bit by checking out http://prologue.devonlegacy.com
Though it's not necessary and you don't get a HUGE scope of it. But you will find out a LOT more about it in this series!
Jamie: And much more! It's what's on the inside that counts!
Vickie: I don't know what you could mean by “typo”. I don't see anything wrong at all ;)
And that is why you get named in the credits! xD
I dont know why sometimes I add that ' to it and sometimes I do it correctly. Its annoying :3
Jamie59 at 7:38PM, Oct. 31, 2013
At least you can still turn it off when the talking heads get too irritating.
Peipei at 12:26PM, Oct. 31, 2013
Lol somebody doesn't wanna go to work! And no worries, i'm not one to criticize how a person uses their grammar, so long as it's still legible xD.
man in black at 9:39AM, Oct. 31, 2013
great page
usedbooks at 5:56AM, Oct. 31, 2013
Lol. Typing fast phonetically can mess up even the most grammar-conscious. Contractions are the bane of English (but needed for natural-sounding speech). -- Oh, and my brother-in-law is English, so I can help with diction. For effect, you might consider spelling things the English way, with more "u's" and "tyre" instead of "tire." It might not read differently, but readers can interpret the accent. Other than that, there are just a few things with different names in English than American. (Trousers, not pants. Chips, not fries. Petrol, not gas. Etc.)