Ch 8, Page 6, Tanica Bookreading

Speedball on Aug. 22, 2009

These aren't necessarily references to any actual fiction books/comics/whatever you guys may be thinking of. “Being deleted from all living memory” has happened in a few things I've read, and it scares the absolute crap out of me.

Originally, I was going to not have Tanica have any audible-to-the-audience voice, or a visibly expressive form. That's how it was for most of the chapter she was introduced in. I decided it was too hard to write an evolving character that is completely invisible to the reader, though, so that's why we get Blue Tanica Spirit In Darkness now. What do you think?

EDIT: UGH, something's off on the faces in panels 3, 7 and 8. I need to re-draw them.