Lilac at 11:22AM, July 23, 2009

Somebody's crankers. XD

Ten chan at 1:02PM, Oct. 4, 2007

I really like the character designs. I know that the art evolves quite a bit, but I'm new to this. But I did a double-take at the tail - a tail! and her ears! because she's "humanoid?" - and Mota's face is just too pretty. ^_^

Toshubi at 11:36PM, May 22, 2007

I'm supprised the authorities aren't already on thier way over for dessert

Zenstrive at 2:35PM, April 26, 2007

put more expressions on the dialogue panels

legendkiller13 at 10:10AM, April 7, 2007

ahhh, i likr run on sentences, at least if they have a point. i think most people speak that way, you say what you got to say and not worry to much about grammar and pause in the heat of the moment. i kinda always liked the emily dickenson style, do what feels right type of art...

captaintomx at 8:24PM, Jan. 28, 2007

The scar tit continues to stalk me... wait did I just say tit instead of it...hehehheheheh...yeaaah.

Darwin at 6:35PM, Jan. 4, 2007

I like your style, but I would suggest looking at the dialogue a little bit. You have a lot of run on sentences here. I would recommend that you read them aloud to yourself...you will be surprised how much this reveals about sentence structure. As an example: Your first long word bubble. I would break it up to say "Honey, I would like to introduce to you (I would drop to you...introduce actually suggest "to the person")my new Pals. They will be staying with us for a little bit. Is that all right love?...etc" You see how much stronger and more realistic it sounds? Other than that...Great stuff! I will keep this kind of constructive crit to pm's if you would rather, just let me know.

Strikezero101 at 5:43AM, Nov. 18, 2006

You have a gorgeous style. How long have you been drawing?