Don't care for the last panel too much but I think my lettering is improving at least. NO inks on this page, just a sketch that I mostly worked out in GIMP
I love the coloring, but your balloons are a little "too" see through. It can make reading your text a little difficult. Your balloons should pulls the readers eye through the story, not blend in to the background.
I understand not wanting to cover up that beautiful coloring job, but a little pre-planning on balloon placement can help to minimize this.
Keep it up!
polo at 6:16PM, Oct. 20, 2007
The coloring is amazing!
trevoramueller at 1:34PM, Sept. 27, 2007
I love the coloring, but your balloons are a little "too" see through. It can make reading your text a little difficult. Your balloons should pulls the readers eye through the story, not blend in to the background. I understand not wanting to cover up that beautiful coloring job, but a little pre-planning on balloon placement can help to minimize this. Keep it up!
pumpkin499 at 5:49PM, Sept. 22, 2007
kinda lame how he hit the dog