oh!
*goes back to change the chapter name*
omg, thank you so much for telling me!^^
& thank you so much for linking me
that made me really really happyy :D *singing* lol
oh, yea, i didn't really feel like Mashiko should repeat her name.
but in most of the mangas i read, the characters restate themselves a lot on the 2nd chapter.
so, i feel like i have to do it or else it wouldn't fee right *heh heh* ^^"
By the way... linked from my comic's homatie to Forgotten memories. If you want to check it out there is a link in Tain of Exile's page to the homesite ;)
Mashiko's hairstyle looks interesting in this chapter, but I wish to see it better. Anyway... I felt a bit strange when she's telling her name and such in the second chapter when she has already done that in the first one, but if you feel like doing so it's okay.
Hmm... How come you still give the pages the title 'chapter1' when we are already in chapter 2?
Oh and I commented now the finished title page.
But I'm liking the story all the time more.
hmmm,...I'm not a big fan of the blurb boxes, that state the obvious, right in the middle of a story. You're kinda repetitive because you've already let the reader know what their names are and such. I think any talented artist could give a background of a character with just body/facial positions or diolouge between the characters. Using blurbs is (in my opinion) cheating. It spoils the story. However I like how you left out the really rediculous info that NO ONE needs to know for the story. i.e. blood type, birthday, horoschope....etc. Sorry to make this comment a novel! I get over excited sometimes! keep up the good work!
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I just read the whole thing in one sitting; the story is great, the characters are great, the artwork is just beautiful... well done. Keep up the good work! I'm five-ing and fave-ing it :)
shany at 10:03AM, Aug. 30, 2006
Really pretty manga! The toning and inking is really nice! Keep it up! ^__^
What A Life at 10:28AM, Aug. 27, 2006
oh! *goes back to change the chapter name* omg, thank you so much for telling me!^^ & thank you so much for linking me that made me really really happyy :D *singing* lol oh, yea, i didn't really feel like Mashiko should repeat her name. but in most of the mangas i read, the characters restate themselves a lot on the 2nd chapter. so, i feel like i have to do it or else it wouldn't fee right *heh heh* ^^"
winzrella at 3:11AM, Aug. 27, 2006
By the way... linked from my comic's homatie to Forgotten memories. If you want to check it out there is a link in Tain of Exile's page to the homesite ;)
winzrella at 2:02AM, Aug. 27, 2006
Mashiko's hairstyle looks interesting in this chapter, but I wish to see it better. Anyway... I felt a bit strange when she's telling her name and such in the second chapter when she has already done that in the first one, but if you feel like doing so it's okay. Hmm... How come you still give the pages the title 'chapter1' when we are already in chapter 2? Oh and I commented now the finished title page. But I'm liking the story all the time more.
x_eko_x at 12:05PM, Aug. 25, 2006
More Please~
blueyes at 6:19PM, Aug. 24, 2006
hmmm,...I'm not a big fan of the blurb boxes, that state the obvious, right in the middle of a story. You're kinda repetitive because you've already let the reader know what their names are and such. I think any talented artist could give a background of a character with just body/facial positions or diolouge between the characters. Using blurbs is (in my opinion) cheating. It spoils the story. However I like how you left out the really rediculous info that NO ONE needs to know for the story. i.e. blood type, birthday, horoschope....etc. Sorry to make this comment a novel! I get over excited sometimes! keep up the good work!
CZweig at 1:41PM, Aug. 23, 2006
Gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. I just read the whole thing in one sitting; the story is great, the characters are great, the artwork is just beautiful... well done. Keep up the good work! I'm five-ing and fave-ing it :)
Kagomas at 12:53PM, Aug. 23, 2006
Like the new avatar!
Pali at 12:12PM, Aug. 23, 2006
Once again this is lovely ^____^
targento37 at 11:33AM, Aug. 23, 2006
Hmm... maybe. I haven't been here in a while. I better check. Good page, by the way.