Jessy Profile
Twilight Faerie on Jan. 14, 2007
This is Jessy.
Long story short, Jessy appeared on the steps of the Eastern castle, begging to be let in after being assaulted by the infamous dictator known as the Ex-Princess. Queen Despereaux of the Eastern First kingdom took her in as her own daughter and immediately took a liking to the girl. This brought up suspicions about the healer girl being so liked by the Queen, but no one knows her real story. Besides Despereaux, Robin, Cid, And Desdemona. You'll learn who they are later.
Twilight_of_the_gods at 1:31PM, Jan. 21, 2007
nice coloring!
Nigellashade at 9:37PM, Jan. 15, 2007
Woah!, Thank you!!... I think the term *healer* is more of a great form of responsibility. A healer can be more than a physical healer, but also have healing trait's for the mind and energy. This character seems to access those skills.. I like the way you made the this female a wolf demon, she has Beautiful features.. But i love the characteristic of her vision abilities..either not from true site, but a Astral site..^^ Twilight Faerie, this update is awesome in color, and the description is very nicely done. Lot's of Hugs to you, & I hope you have a wonderful week.. ~M~ v~~~~v
Twilight Faerie at 8:09PM, Jan. 15, 2007
It's ok, Rubygem. I still love ya. ^^
Rubygem at 8:02PM, Jan. 15, 2007
ah man i did not get to help with the char*shurgs*oh well
Twilight Faerie at 8:02PM, Jan. 15, 2007
Oi, no bad feelings. And call it MY area of expertise to explain every little thing that you've put into detail. Of course, you must not be a very open minded artist. ^^ This is called a Profile page. On profile pages, and on regular ones, you DON'T have a main point of focus, see? ^^ Those are just sketches of Jessy and excerpts from other pages. ^^ The blue from before, now that comes into play LATER. Notice how Jessy will never let you see not only her eyes but the area AROUND them? ^^ There's something about that as well. Besides, I used too much beige in that page. XD I don't use paint ALL THE TIME. I have this thing called Microsoft Picture It! which is sort of like photoshop, but makes you work harder. And yeah, I'm working on Dialougue bubbles so you can chilax there, bud. I dotn' know what style really to use. And if you read my blogs, you would have known that. ^^ I have to say I'm proud of myself for that page, though. The transition was wonderful in my eyes. "I can't remember though..." Next page "What do YOU remember?" See? ^^ Adn the plot's comming so chilax! ^^ I like making my readers anxious. XP
AshleeS at 7:44PM, Jan. 15, 2007
As a fellow MSPAINT user, if that's what you use, I want to issue some advice. Call it... my area of expertice. When you draw something and you want it to be the main point of focus, don't just draw it and then paint one color around it. For example, do not draw the eye and then paint everything else around it blue. It makes it look strange and out of place. You need to draw the rest of the face in it, too--whatever fits. That way it looks in place and whole. Also, Try not to use so many words in one panel. The example is once again the eye in a previous page with Jessy. It makes the transition awkward. Use a few pages to explain her eye condition, all the while using different panels to show the two characters, responses to the character's words, and the scenery around them. Dialogue bubbles would be the best to add, too. And PLLEEAASE do something with the plot of this comic. I see so much potential in your drawing skills. They are gorgeous, but if I had a nickel for every comic here with furries that have magic classes, demons, and normal names, I'd be rich. Sorry if I was harsh. I'm a critic-person. Good job so far, but it'll need work!