The Freak Page 5
Trisscar on July 14, 2009
Ah, sod it. I've decided to upload two pages today.
I want to punch the faces of the two guys on the left in the fourth panel.
I took a bit of a risk with the final panel as well, using that kind of perspective. Tell me what you think of it, did I pull it off? Or does it need some work?
Trisscar at 9:37AM, July 16, 2009
Well in any case, I'll try to put more detail into my drawings next time. Thanks muchly for your feedback :) It's greatly appreciated.
Aleks55 at 4:28AM, July 16, 2009
I don't know, maybe that could be it, but the other parts looks pretty good, for some reason that wall looks flat to me.
Trisscar at 2:30AM, July 16, 2009
Umm, how do you mean by flat? Like it doesn't have enough graffiti, or it should have bricks on it?
Aleks55 at 5:54PM, July 15, 2009
the left wall looks a little flat, but my entire comic is flat so it doesn't matter I guess :P overall I like the comic so far.