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Avart on March 19, 2017

Here´s the sport class, in Japan they use this funny looking sports shoes. To me, it looks like rubber sandals :D

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GuyWithChainsaw at 11:09PM, March 19, 2017

Man, i still can't believe how good the art is. The backgrounds are amazing! By the way. I think you might wanna check if this and previous page is written correctly. I'm not sure if "What will Kokoro-chan meant?" is correct. I think there should be "did" instead of "will". Also i think on the previous page in the first sentance there should be "didn't you" istead of "don't you" I am not sure if these are incorrect but maybe it's worth checking out. Just trying to help out since i had to correct some text in the past myself :)

GuyWithChainsaw at 2:17AM, March 20, 2017

No problem! English is not my first language either so it makes writing harder sometimes for sure!

Avart at 1:29AM, March 20, 2017

Thank you so much! I'll check all those misspellings, since english isn't my language I need to double check before I upload a page. You´re so kind!

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