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Avart on May 28, 2017
Hitomi is making the first movement, Kokoro isn't prepared for this and got surprised.
A funny fact: When I was younger (around 16 years in 1999) I see the movie Cruel Intentions, which I liked a lot. In the scene when Kathryn (Sarah Michelle Gellar) kissed Cecile (Selma Blair), some saliva is draining from their mouths and I thought “man, that scene is wrong, how's the Director didn't notice that”… and here I am, 18 years later recreating in some way that scene as a tribute and thinking “well, if there's no saliva, there's no passion”.
In other things, if you look closely, there´s a detail which until now was hidden, but later in the story will be revealed. If you think you've found it, you can comment it freely :D
BTW, I've updated my art gallery, you can access from here or by clicking in the image at your left. There are 3 new images (well 2, the other one is a sketch). I hope you like it.
Thanks again from reading, see you soon!
BustyLaroo at 9:14AM, Oct. 2, 2018
Just a bit of a not for anatomy, cuz I'm a stickler for it... that view of Hitomi looming over Kokoro? If she's on her hands and knees, her breasts would be "hanging" a lot more, not pushed up and round still (even with a bra). Still though, your art is wonderful overall! :D
BustyLaroo at 11:54AM, Oct. 2, 2018
It's okay. I look at some of mine and go "omfg what was I doing" xD
Avart at 11:35AM, Oct. 2, 2018
Thank you, you're right. Sometimes those little big details haunt me XD
thunderdavid at 7:37AM, June 3, 2017
Ok. The only detail I've notice is Hitomi's tongue (panel 3?) is possibly pierce? But that is cool how your panels display their eyes with the both mouths in the middle panel.
Avart at 12:30AM, June 5, 2017
You guessed it! Hitomi's tongue is pierced. I'm glad you liked the arrangement of panels :D
GuyWithChainsaw at 8:17AM, May 29, 2017
Interesting backstory on the saliva thing. It does help to create that more erotic relationship between characters. I tried to find that detail so i can be the smartass in the comments but I couldn't XD The only idea i had is that the bite mark disapeared but from this perspective i don't think you could even see it. Im dieing to find out what's it all about :)
Avart at 10:54PM, May 29, 2017
Thanks! And no, the bite mark isn't visible from this view point. Don´t push yourself, later on it will be revealed (although, isn't that great :D)
KimLuster at 10:45AM, May 28, 2017
Yes, that stream of Saliva just makes it all the Hotter!!! I've yet to find the 'hidden detail' but I shall keep looking!!
Avart at 12:15AM, May 29, 2017
:D Really isn't a great thing, but it's common between teenagers.