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Avart on Sept. 10, 2017
We're approaching the end of this ‘cultural exchange’ between a vampire thirsty of virgin blood and a schoolgirl which by no means looks like a virgin.
As a fun fact, in the original one-shot script this scene wasn't included. After Hitomi cried and didn't allow Hayate to leave, she fell asleep and Hayate just sits and contempled her. ‘That’s pretty boring' I think, so changed the things a little and the scene was about 2 pages… but what can I show in only 2 pages? That's why this extended to almost the middle of the chapter (maybe more).
Usually I translate the SFX, but sometimes I ran out of space and I don't want to mess with the layout, so I leave it that way. If you're curious, the middle SFX translates like ‘sloppy kiss’ and the bottom is like ‘trembling (excited)’
See you soon!
KimLuster at 6:26AM, Sept. 11, 2017
lol at first I thought she was giving a BJ, But then saw she was a little too high up...!! Very steamy stuff!
Avart at 7:47PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Hahaha well, that's exactly the effect I was trying to achieve... and Hitomi definitely is going south ;)
GuyWithChainsaw at 12:59AM, Sept. 11, 2017
Also forgot to mention. Nice comeback line from Hitomi!
Avart at 7:42PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Wait to read what she's saying in the next page ;)
bravo1102 at 11:06PM, Sept. 10, 2017
You got more than you asked for Hayate. Hope you liked it.
Avart at 7:41PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Full service indeed!
AmeliaP at 2:31PM, Sept. 10, 2017
If she's following what she did until now, so the next thing she'll bite is his... ouch!
AmeliaP at 10:01PM, Sept. 23, 2017
XD
Avart at 7:40PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Hahaha, just like Andy said: 'occhio per occhio' :D
Jason Moon at 1:03PM, Sept. 10, 2017
Show him who is boss Hitomi!! :D
Avart at 7:36PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Hahaha :D Hayate provoked Hitomi, so he can't complain!
GuyWithChainsaw at 10:35AM, Sept. 10, 2017
I think the way you did it here worked much better then what you had planned originaly. I feel like the original idea might of make the story progresion too slow. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more
Avart at 7:35PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Thank you! I think the same as you :D
cdmalcolm1 at 10:11AM, Sept. 10, 2017
role as been reversed. Love the way you do hair.
Avart at 7:33PM, Sept. 11, 2017
Yeah, he didn't expecting this reaction from Hitomi. Thank you, it's a little complicated but I think Hitomi's hair is very special, just as her eyes.