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Avart on Sept. 17, 2018
The last part of this scene!
Doesn't feel good when a main character after being ‘abused’ gets revenge?
Well, this part of the chapter was a little ‘quiet’ in matter of dialogues but it's compensated by the action itself. The last panel is the typical cliche, but… who am I to change the rules?
Not much left to say, I'll leave the rest up to you :D
I've added a little image here, hope you like it!
AmeliaP at 10:03PM, Sept. 23, 2017
I'll not be so gentle"... I believe you!
bravo1102 at 8:47PM, Sept. 17, 2017
Like a predator in heat. We're way past gentle here kiddo.
Avart at 11:28PM, Sept. 19, 2017
Hahaha, even Hayate can't believe that he is the prey XD
Jason Moon at 4:03PM, Sept. 17, 2017
Now Hayate is in the clutches of Hitomi! He will never think the same of her after this :)
Avart at 11:26PM, Sept. 19, 2017
Even I can't think the same of her XD Really, after making this scene I've toying with the future events and, if you like her now, you'll gonna love her after.
Banes at 2:39PM, Sept. 17, 2017
Steamy!
Avart at 11:23PM, Sept. 19, 2017
You bet! This scene took me so much time to get it done, I'm glad you liked it :D
KimLuster at 12:33PM, Sept. 17, 2017
It's still a bit unnerving how she's taken control, and has a certain... ruthlessness to her!! Beautiful work!!
Avart at 11:22PM, Sept. 19, 2017
Thank you Kim! Really appreciate your support :D We can see that Hitomi is like a wolf in sheep's clothing
GuyWithChainsaw at 12:24PM, Sept. 17, 2017
Wow, there is something really cool about Hitomi's face on this page, I really like it. It doesn't really matter if something is a cliche or not. What matters is if it's written well or not :)
Avart at 11:18PM, Sept. 19, 2017
Thank you! Later on the story, this events will be crucial to understand some things. I'm glad you've liked it :D