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Avart on Nov. 11, 2017
Hello again!
As you remember, in the previous page Hitomi is wondering what to say to Kokoro, but she realizes that the door of her apartment is open.
Hitomi is a very curious girl, so she enters and there's a mess in the living room.
We know a little fact about Kokoro: she has a job (not a big one) to pay the bills. Unlike Hitomi, Kokoro doesn't have a lot of money. You'll know about that later.
Hitomi takes off her sneakers, remember that it's Nagoya. I only have done this type of scene twice, and I don't know how to make another one and make it different. Hayate has been twice in Hitomi's room and he didn't take off his shoes, I suppose for a vampire it doesn't matter XD
Anyway, thank you for being here. You're the best!
:D
AmeliaP at 7:56PM, Nov. 16, 2017
Beautiful page! I like the way you didn't convert the grey into halftone patterns, I like it the most.
AmeliaP at 5:15AM, Nov. 20, 2017
I think your artwork looks better with this solid grey than tone patterns because there are many grey scale variables. More than two tones of the same hue makes the things pretty hard to tone. I think you made the best choice (technically talking.).
Avart at 7:23PM, Nov. 17, 2017
Thanks! I really have a bad time trying to make the tone patterns look good, but I give up XD.
KimLuster at 6:31AM, Nov. 13, 2017
I really hope Kokoro is okay...! Love the room - as other's have said, it does reveal some insights into Kokoro (other than the atypical tidiness)!!
Avart at 7:22PM, Nov. 17, 2017
I hope that too, we haven't see her since almost 2 chapters ago. Thank you!
thunderdavid at 5:18AM, Nov. 13, 2017
At this point, I would make use of that cell phone. Be careful.
Avart at 7:21PM, Nov. 17, 2017
Yeah, normally they don't use it when it's needed because... well, you'll know why in the next page :D
Jason Moon at 6:50AM, Nov. 12, 2017
Beautiful! well...a little messy lol
Avart at 7:20PM, Nov. 17, 2017
Thanks my friend, I hope Kokoro coul clean all this mess XD
agentny003 at 5:27AM, Nov. 12, 2017
Boy her best friend sure is a hoarder.
Avart at 7:19PM, Nov. 17, 2017
hahaha totally true!
GuyWithChainsaw at 4:00AM, Nov. 12, 2017
The room can tell a lot about the person. Nice page, love the shot of the room and also Hitomi's hair on first panel look fantastic
Avart at 7:19PM, Nov. 17, 2017
You're right! I think Kokoro is the opposite of Hitomi even in this stuff XD. Thankyou!
bravo1102 at 3:26AM, Nov. 12, 2017
And suspicions build. Nice work on the textures and patterns, really like how everything isn't outlined and some things are implied with tones.
Avart at 7:16PM, Nov. 17, 2017
Thank you! Still trying new techniques :D