Pages 82 & 83 (End of chapter)
Avart on Nov. 25, 2017
Hello again!
This time I bring you a double page because I want to preserve the sequence. The text in Kokoro's diary is hand made, I tried to replicate a girl's writing… it was SO DAMN hard XD
As a fun fact, this scene was inspired by the song Suedehead from Morrisey. The lyrics describes 99% of the events after Hitomi and Hayate had sex… I mean, they had a cultural exchange *cough, cough*
Here's the thing:
Why do you come here
When you know it makes things hard for me?
When you know, oh
Why do you come?
Why do you telephone?
You had to sneak into my room
Just to read my diary
“It was just to see, just to see”
(All the things you knew I'd written about you)
Oh, so many illustrations
We've reach the end of chapter 4, a little longer than the previous ones.
The next chapter will bring back action, blood and gore plus some suggestive situations and a new pair of (nasty) characters, so please stay tuned :D
Thank you all!
GuyWithChainsaw at 12:32PM, Nov. 28, 2017
"I tried to replicate a girl's writing…" Ah and that's exactly why I love your creation! :D I wonder who might that person that appeared be. I don't think It's Kokoro. It might be Hayate I guess. But maybe... Hayate's brother!!! Please! I want to see him already!
Avart at 7:47PM, Nov. 28, 2017
Thank you so much my friend! :D Please be patient, you'll soon know him
AmeliaP at 1:49AM, Nov. 27, 2017
Tsc, tsc! This book isn't meant to be read, Hitomi!
Avart at 7:46PM, Nov. 28, 2017
Yeah, she's playing with fire :O
KimLuster at 7:18PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Well, not surprised...! As someone who's had a same-sex close friend hit on me, it really does change things!! That said, I think something more important just came into the room!! Wow, her face!!
GuyWithChainsaw at 12:30PM, Nov. 28, 2017
"hope Hitomi doesn't fall in love with the first one that gets in her way XD" Did... you just roast your own character? I love you.
Avart at 8:58PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Sure it change things! New vampires are arriving to the city, hope Hitomi doesn't fall in love with the first one that gets in her way XD
Tantz_Aerine at 3:58PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Well, depending on the definition of fun- there's definitely thrills. Also, she'll never look at Kokoro the same way.
Avart at 8:51PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Totally true! Things will never be the same between this girls.
agentny003 at 9:42AM, Nov. 26, 2017
Told you not to read it. Should've listen to me. Shame shame shame. You should NEVER EVER read someone else's diary. By the way how did you do that japanese font on the left panel? It looks awesome.
Avart at 7:53PM, Nov. 26, 2017
I'm agree with you my friend. Other's privacy is a sacred thing :). You mean the font on the top left panel? In this particular case, I used 'Google Translate' and typed 'my diary', the result was 私の日記, I just 'copy-paste' it in my comic software, applied some transform and redraw the letters manually.
bravo1102 at 6:00AM, Nov. 26, 2017
Read a friend's diary and it's inevitable that you'll be caught in the act. Truly you're better off not knowing.
Avart at 7:40PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Yeah, another typical cliche in this story.
Jason Moon at 10:53PM, Nov. 25, 2017
I knew Hitomi wouldn't be able to resist! Hehe. But I'm glad she looked because now she knows Kokoro's true feelings for her. Who could that be?
Avart at 7:40PM, Nov. 26, 2017
Hehe I can't blame her. Here´s like a 'point of no return' for Hitomi (assuming the fact that Kokoro's still alive XD)