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KimLuster on Feb. 21, 2013
This chapter is drawing to a close. Should be fairly obvious Kimber Lee isn't going to find Eli in his studio. But there's always next chapter. The next chapter I'll be revealing more clues about what's happening to Kimber, along with a few more hints of why my story has the title it does. I've gone three chapters now with very little to go on in that respect, so thanks for sticking with me. Everything: my proportions, shadowing, and art in general, and the story itself, is a work in progress, so if something doesn't look or feel quite right, don't hesitate to offer helpful advice. I'm really glad I started this comic - it's been a lot of fun so far, and it's far from over.
skyangel at 3:46PM, Nov. 12, 2014
Yeah i did wonder where he vanished too. I was kinda hoping he might be under the piano.:)
cres0055 at 9:13PM, March 24, 2013
Great page. I like the choice to do the silent thing with her erupting in emotion at the end.
KimLuster at 5:07AM, March 22, 2013
Thanks a bunch, Paul - I'm not unhappy with my progress. I feel I'm dong alright. I'm still trying to find a "look" that is mine. Haven't found it yet, but someday I will. Glad you're enjoying it so far :)
PaulEberhardt at 2:33AM, March 22, 2013
Both the story and the art are outstanding. I'm aware that's not a terribly helpful thing to say, but it's the only one that comes to my mind right now. ;)
KimLuster at 8:26PM, March 21, 2013
I see dream people - they don't know they're not real...
plymayer at 8:11PM, March 21, 2013
Hey, they don't know they are dream people. I'm enjoying the story so far.
Peipei at 7:40PM, March 21, 2013
They better listen to her...