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KimLuster on Oct. 28, 2015
These pages haven't been the most fun to draw, but the story…! Well… I did change my comic to mature…
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Considering the subject matter, it just started feeling contrived to overly self-censor everything, but I don't think I'll ever get gratuitous with it…
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So does Eli wants the Godstrain itself (and is willing to use Kimber Lee fear and revulsion against her)…?! Well, he has been in some sort of contact state with it for a while, hinted at in pages such as 222-224, and with pages like 255 and 259, and this page, the Godstrain seems to have some sort of motive too… (the story itself should convey all that but I know with webcomics and the long time between pages, stuff can be forgotten…)
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Bad, bad part in the tale… But Kimber Lee's pretty tough (first f-bomb!) and this story is far from over…!
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Thanks for Reading Everyone!
strixvanallen at 6:21PM, Oct. 28, 2015
I'm sitting at the edge of the chair, waiting for more. :3
Sway at 5:44PM, Oct. 28, 2015
Really nice layout work; a lot of stuff going on here, but the imagery flows really well. I'm also happy to see that you're letting the story go where it needs to, instead of self-censoring. A good story has to be able to stretch its legs and run, and setting up artificial hurdles for it to bypass just hinders its pace. And, for what it's worth, with a story so psyche-intensive, it comes as no surprise that some really dark depths are going to be explored. It doesn't come off as cheap or exploitive, but rather extremely uncomfortable (but in a good way).
tupapayon at 5:28PM, Oct. 28, 2015
As they say in anime: let me show you my true power...
Genejoke at 5:12PM, Oct. 28, 2015
good pages, uncomfortable but good.
Z74 at 4:44PM, Oct. 28, 2015
That's it Kimber - don't give in !