Page 300
KimLuster on March 1, 2016
Page 300!! (my 300 movie reference from last page would probably be better served this page…!)
I'm amazed that I've been able to maintain a relatively steady pace with this story (no true RL roadblocks, no burnout, no hiatus)…! *knock on wood*
Anyway, this page… Kimber Lee's first true challenge in this dream Odyssey! The dream-hunks don't count ;) Interesting that she called them ‘Red-Herring Hunks’, as if she knew she was a story and they were an attempt to divert her from the true goal (well I did recently watch Deadpool ;)). But Nah… Kimber Lee doesn't know she's in a story, but she does know she's a dream that's likely to follow some sort of narrative!
Art: I had a little trouble with distance perspective. Top-right panel, Kimber Lee is supposed be fairly high in the air, but the ground doesn't look too far away (except for the tent - it looks to be a mile away…)! And the last panel - that chasm is supposed to be big and yawning, but doesn't look much bigger than a ditch… certainly not hard for someone with her abilities to leap across…! So… just work with me here - she's high and it's wide!!
Thanks for Reading Everyone!
skyangel at 10:38AM, March 3, 2016
I'd love to be able to jump like that!! The stuff of MY dreams! lol Great page and congrats on reaching the 300 mark, your enthusiasm shows in every page! :)
darkace at 10:09AM, March 3, 2016
Congrats on the 300! Really nice pacing and POV on each panel! If I were to show more depth on the first panel, maybe move the tent even closer in the foreground. An extreme CU of the tent along with Kimber flying in the background would show more depth to me, but you definitely have the page well done.
PaulEberhardt at 9:37AM, March 3, 2016
Congrats on the big 300! I think the distance perspective actually works quite well; in a landscape like that, where you have nothing really to compare sizes with, things often do appear closer or further away than they are, so I'd say it looks more realistic than artificially trying to make it hyper-accurate.
tupapayon at 7:11AM, March 3, 2016
"You didn't think it was gonna be that easy, did you?" "You know, for a second there, yeah, I kinda did.' "Silly rabbit." "Trix are..." "...for kids."
tupapayon at 7:08AM, March 3, 2016
300 already?!... this is madness!...
Banes at 6:14AM, March 3, 2016
Nice! I love that wide shot! And that was some astounding alliteration, amigo! Congrats on 300!
Froggtreecomics at 6:01AM, March 3, 2016
Congrats on 300!
bravo1102 at 5:48AM, March 3, 2016
Two things to imply height and size. Make the lines shorter and going away from her as well as blurring the ground to imply the height, distance and speed. For the chasm have the lines arcing away from her not straight down. For altitude you can cheat and sneak in a hint of the horizon line.