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KimLuster on April 21, 2016
Two Things:
1) Socorro's always been a chatterbox, but how she's talking now is quite disturbing to me…!
2) I'm apparently relish beating up my heroine - that also disturbs me…!! haha
But… Kimber Lee just downed her metaphorical can of spinach!!
There's supposed to be some vapor-like tendrils coming from Kimber Lee's face, from where she ate some of Socorro's electric discharge, but they, didn't turn out like I wanted. Can barely see them!!
Also, those two mini-panels at the bottom… I thought they'd be way cooler than they turned out!!
Still, I'm fairly pleased with the page overall!
Two pages left in chapter - as I said many pages back, this is gonna be a long dream; it will go into next chapter, but it will bring a few things together!!
Thanks for reading Everyone!!
Call Me Tom at 7:50AM, April 22, 2016
Time to push back Kim!
Banes at 7:29AM, April 22, 2016
YEAHHHH! Amazing turnaround in that last panel! I like the other shot with Kim in the foreground and Socorro towards the back, too.
bravo1102 at 5:34AM, April 22, 2016
I am still not certain this isn't Kimber Lee 's own subconscious doing this to her. Or Sorroco goading her forward. At least in the same situation it is what I would do. You won't do this on your own so I will be on your back on till you realize you can do it on your own. Shout out to my drill sergeants for dragging it out of me 28 years ago.
tupapayon at 5:27AM, April 22, 2016
"You didn't think it was gonna be that easy, did you?" -- "You know, for a second there, yeah, I kinda did."