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KimLuster on June 16, 2016
So I finished my little project quicker than I thought I would (I usually do) so was able to get this page out in a reasonable time-frame, all things considered!!
Did Kimber Lee finally shut Eli up?!! Find out next page!!
Pretty humorous anatomy error in one of the panels - cookie to whoever finds it!! (the proportion errors don't count - this one's just wrong period ;))
Thanks for Reading Everyone!!
LanceDanger at 4:53AM, June 17, 2016
Cool action!
PaulEberhardt at 2:49AM, June 17, 2016
Nah! You don't shut up someone like that, that easily. But the general direction isn't too bad - that's the one language they understand. (Pssst... don't pass it on, but Eli's thumb is on the wrong side of the hand in panel 3, right? Happens to me quite often, too, somehow. But I don't think I'd have spotted it if you hadn't asked me to look. ;) )
bravo1102 at 11:44PM, June 16, 2016
Right in the kisser. Just what he deserved. Is Eli's arm backwards in that first panel? Or is that an extra pectoral muscle?
plymayer at 10:06PM, June 16, 2016
Great action. Well, he had that coming.
Banes at 8:34PM, June 16, 2016
We see the true horrible anger/evil of Eli in these final moments. Excellent "timing" on this page, with the one panel devoted to the foot against the rock face. The last panel feels very "sudden"! Kudos! I don't see the anatomical error, though...
Peipei at 8:25PM, June 16, 2016
I guess that's it for big boy! Too busy throwing insults at Kimber to have any sense to throw any real hits! Oh well, his giant loss (no pun intended!) xD!
tupapayon at 7:37PM, June 16, 2016
I thought he would never shut up...