Alright... You've improved.. But I noticed on some...
The BG is re-sized manually. Never do that. Only use the stretch/screw, with numbers that end in 00. How do I know this? The people are way to small compared to the Door, and it's not 2x.
Use [i]REAL[/i] text-boxes.
Grammar.
Capitalization.
Work on sprite placement.
Add more expressions.
I probably have more to write, but my eyes are killing me and so is my head... >>; I'm not feeling to good today, I'll write more, eventually.
But I suggest, YOU UPDATE ONLY ONCE! I hate having to read 50 comics, per one comic, a day. Dial-Up wouldn't let me do it, anyway. I suggest you take YOUR TIME while making them. You're characters now have the personalities of the Pebble Version, the gayest comic on the Inter-web, characters. I'd suggest to get away from that... Cause... That comic sucks. Sit down and write your script out in Word, spell check and grammar check it. Then import it into Paint, WHILE USING REAL BOXES. I've seen comics die within DAYS because they made 50 comics and ran out of ideas so quickly.
Drazi500 at 10:51AM, Sept. 27, 2006
Your pikachu is too big in my point of view.
Konochi at 8:38PM, Sept. 26, 2006
ok thank you
KevinClifford at 8:30PM, Sept. 26, 2006
Alright... You've improved.. But I noticed on some... The BG is re-sized manually. Never do that. Only use the stretch/screw, with numbers that end in 00. How do I know this? The people are way to small compared to the Door, and it's not 2x. Use [i]REAL[/i] text-boxes. Grammar. Capitalization. Work on sprite placement. Add more expressions. I probably have more to write, but my eyes are killing me and so is my head... >>; I'm not feeling to good today, I'll write more, eventually. But I suggest, YOU UPDATE ONLY ONCE! I hate having to read 50 comics, per one comic, a day. Dial-Up wouldn't let me do it, anyway. I suggest you take YOUR TIME while making them. You're characters now have the personalities of the Pebble Version, the gayest comic on the Inter-web, characters. I'd suggest to get away from that... Cause... That comic sucks. Sit down and write your script out in Word, spell check and grammar check it. Then import it into Paint, WHILE USING REAL BOXES. I've seen comics die within DAYS because they made 50 comics and ran out of ideas so quickly.
will123 at 4:24PM, Sept. 26, 2006
Funny though the 3rd panel is scary