This one made me laugh more than the other... Although they both made me laugh.
I like your style instead of Sprite comics (I still like Sprite comics, but they are alot of them including mine... Good to see new stuff..).
Uhm.. I like the title :D
Some thing would be a little bit more panels so I see the Clefable's (or what ever Pokemon that is)face and stuff but that's just an idea.
I still don't understand why it's such a terrible idea, as compared other Pokemon webcomics on Drunkduck or something like Star Guys- http://www.joeyandjolty.co.uk/starguys/ . Please elaborate.
Also... it's only the second page. It's very hard to include a lot of plot in two pages- unless you want a long narrative in pretty fonts. And besides, I'm not really aiming for an involving, emotional, or very "deep" plotline.
You acually have nice drawing talent, but I don't think you should portray them with this comic. It's a terrible idea, and it doesn't really have a story to it.
Smuds at 8:01AM, Sept. 2, 2009
This one made me laugh more than the other... Although they both made me laugh. I like your style instead of Sprite comics (I still like Sprite comics, but they are alot of them including mine... Good to see new stuff..). Uhm.. I like the title :D Some thing would be a little bit more panels so I see the Clefable's (or what ever Pokemon that is)face and stuff but that's just an idea.
Reikouten at 5:36PM, Dec. 30, 2007
Gwahahaha I found it >:D (This is CrAZyKat btw) and damn you on your tablet control :K My lines still looks like crap T.T
Ketaikeon at 10:18AM, Dec. 30, 2007
I still don't understand why it's such a terrible idea, as compared other Pokemon webcomics on Drunkduck or something like Star Guys- http://www.joeyandjolty.co.uk/starguys/ . Please elaborate. Also... it's only the second page. It's very hard to include a lot of plot in two pages- unless you want a long narrative in pretty fonts. And besides, I'm not really aiming for an involving, emotional, or very "deep" plotline.
Lukas Kirkby at 12:00AM, Dec. 30, 2007
You acually have nice drawing talent, but I don't think you should portray them with this comic. It's a terrible idea, and it doesn't really have a story to it.