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krazy_taco on Nov. 29, 2007
Tarami and Choodori are awakened by the two boys. With different results…
I like this page a lot personally. it was signs of love (what comic would be complete without such? ;D ) and also some humor. i think my drawings were good as well with perspective and such. but my layout needs to be better. -just critiqued myself-
what do you guys think?
Leon the Armadilldo at 3:14AM, Dec. 7, 2007
is that a tree or an explosion?
Darth Mongoose at 2:52PM, Dec. 1, 2007
The page layouts are improving. Maybe try to improve the panel layouts. You have a lot of 'person standing straight in the middle of the panel' shots at the moment. Try experimenting with putting people at the edge of panels, or off-centre or arranged on a diagonal, or with a character in the foreground and another in the back ground. Have a look at some comics and see how they do things.