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krazy_taco on Dec. 21, 2007
the team plans to go to cave pluto.
Sooo is it an improvement? i think so. if not please say so. i love critique!
comments please!
The Last Quest
krazy_taco on Dec. 21, 2007
the team plans to go to cave pluto.
Sooo is it an improvement? i think so. if not please say so. i love critique!
comments please!
Leon the Armadilldo at 4:30PM, Dec. 22, 2007
that last panel... i think this is gonna be one interesting comic!
Leon the Armadilldo at 4:29PM, Dec. 22, 2007
very much so, young one...
Darth Mongoose at 3:14PM, Dec. 22, 2007
Yes. It's an improvement. It makes the page look more open and dynamic. But maybe try getting a ruler on the job to get those borders straighter? What some people do is to clip or masking tape the paper to a board or table and use a t-square and a set square to get their borders perpendicular, or invest in a rotoring drawing board or a board with a slide rule. I really like the body language you've used to show the personalities of the characters on this page. Also, that last panel made me laugh out loud!