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corytheterrible on Feb. 2, 2007
I don't like to be negative about my work, because even if I don't like it, other people might, but having said that…I don't like this page that much…But it gets the job done I suppose.
corytheterrible on Feb. 2, 2007
I don't like to be negative about my work, because even if I don't like it, other people might, but having said that…I don't like this page that much…But it gets the job done I suppose.
aquapermanence at 5:14PM, Jan. 19, 2009
The heavy outlines on the flames are the only thing I find jarring. The style is solid, and the story has a good hook.
Antionestrife at 10:53AM, Feb. 3, 2007
Yes it does. From how your story is flowing along I see no real flaw with this page. You left some suspense to how this queen of hell looks like, and I'm not the least bit confused. Good work!