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corytheterrible on May 15, 2007
“Think of how stupid the average person is, and realize half of them are stupider than that.”
-George Carlin
That shouldn't make me smile as much as it does…Ooooh, I just saw The Path updated, I've got to run now…
L8r.
(Added on)
Oh crap, I just got featured. I'm a little light headed, honest. Now I HAVE to update more regularly. Crap. But thanks to everyone who's taken a minute to enjoy my story, I'll try really hard not to disappoint!
mcman at 7:25PM, May 17, 2007
I saw the feature and I love it! Great story and artwork! You've got me on the edge of my seat!
FAL at 1:54PM, May 17, 2007
Congrats, man! Awesome art!
dgriff13 at 12:39PM, May 17, 2007
Great work, man. Congrats on the feature! Carlin is my hero, btw ;0)
Ollywood at 10:38AM, May 17, 2007
Sheer Awesomeness
mlai at 9:42AM, May 17, 2007
You have 2 weaknesses to an otherwise strong art style. One weakness seem to have been discovered and conquered. Both have to do with your CG not you. (1) You tend to use a bucket-fill CG style where the pen lines are outlined in white, where the CG colors don't touch. This is probably because you don't want the colors to "obscure" your linework. ***This is the worst way to CG linework.*** The colors must be allowed to saturate the lines. This weakness seems to have been corrected in recent pages. (2) Your lines are pixelly. To the point where it looks like it was drawn in MS Paint. Many ppl may say "your lines are smooth." You may think your lines are smooth. I have a good eye and I tell you right now your lines are NOT smooth. The sad part is that your paper artwork prolly looks 10000x better, but some mistake in your scanning ruins everything. GET IT SMOOTH.
timlight at 9:16PM, May 16, 2007
congrats on your DD Feature ^^
Eirikr at 8:44PM, May 16, 2007
You have no idea how long I've searched DD for a comic like this. I thought they didn't exist (that's an extremely high compliment).
jiminycricketX at 7:18PM, May 16, 2007
Woah... I don't usually stoop to such a low level as leaving meaningless, commonly used comments, but I believe this needs to be said: Fived, and Faved.
Eviltwinpixie at 5:10PM, May 16, 2007
Wow, this certainly deserved to get featured- I'm hooked! So yes, you definitely should update more often. ;)
tamlynn at 2:56PM, May 16, 2007
I hate to repeat what everyone else said, but congrats on the feature! I'm faving this...I can't wait to see more! You're off to a good start!
sims2fanatic at 2:31PM, May 16, 2007
I'm not so good at staying updated with comics, but let me say this: every single page I've seen so far has been a little piece of artwork. People and settings meld together in a way I've seldom seen before. Keep doing what you've been doing. This is REALLY great.
legendkiller13 at 11:58AM, May 16, 2007
awsome, just discovered this, its great, i read all the way through, and im favin it
Rina_ran at 10:41AM, May 16, 2007
Yeah, saw the description of the feature and I just had to check out this comic. Congratulations on the feature! Love your characters. Very well drawn and colored. The lighting is always fantastic. Like on this page, so very well done! I liked what you said back on...page 9 I believe. That storytelling is just as/more important than action. I highly believe that and I'm truly looking forward to more of this story unfolding. ^_^
F_Allen at 9:51AM, May 16, 2007
great stuff bro
matteblack at 9:50AM, May 16, 2007
Congrats on the feature! This is a great comic.
spaz at 9:36AM, May 16, 2007
I wish I could say I read this before it got featured, but I'm sure glad it did. outstanding work.
MrGranger at 9:23AM, May 16, 2007
Great! Been following this for a while. Nice to see it featured.
Tommie Kelly at 7:45AM, May 16, 2007
Congrats on the feature!
VegaX at 7:32AM, May 16, 2007
Very nice story and artwork. :) But you should probably try to make those rough speechballons more smooth. Right now they look very pixely and don't fit the rest of the art.
nibbi at 7:27AM, May 16, 2007
Awesome comic. Awesome art.
kingofsnake at 7:20AM, May 16, 2007
Fantastic job shading. I'd actually love to see this page with just inks and not colored
GreatScottComix at 6:56AM, May 16, 2007
Great comic. Congrats. Faved and friended. lol Scott out
iagojester at 5:33AM, May 16, 2007
Yea for being featured. I really enjoy your comic. At first I was worried about the text, but you seemed to switch fonts, so now it's easier to read. On top of that you've got a great style that lies somewhere dangerously between a regular marvel style and some artistic genius mojo, which is exciting. I just hope you don't clean off too much of that art edge. There are a lot of "she"s in this story. And one very bad "he." I like ponouns.
Zac at 1:26AM, May 16, 2007
Congratulations Cory! Welcome to the party! :D :D :D You deserved it
MetoolX597 at 11:54PM, May 15, 2007
Hmm, this looks mightily interesting so far. I'll be curious as to how the story develops in the future.