Ohdear. Look how bad my first page is x.x I didn't even use a ruler. And I filled the blank space at the bottom with a blank space dance. o.O;; Not to mention the old art-ness… Bwah.
tch. i remember how much i tried to get her to do these darker. she never listened tho'. and notice in the fifth pannel how Nataka was floating! it's great! XD
Might I suggest using a darker pencil for the outlines and the words, their sometimes hard to read, such as the first panel. You have alot of talent, so keep it up :P
theduckofanime at 12:38PM, July 2, 2006
Keep it up, but yeah Aereis is right, it's hard to see. you may wanna get a fine point pen as well, but a darker pencil would rule.
Cyberlink at 12:01PM, July 2, 2006
Im with Aereis! Keep it up!
Aereis at 10:00AM, July 2, 2006
Might I suggest using a darker pencil for the outlines and the words, their sometimes hard to read, such as the first panel. You have alot of talent, so keep it up :P