I really enjoy your comic and you have a great sense of composition. My one complaint, however, is that the position of text balloons makes it difficult to read. I never know which balloon should be next. In the second panel, for example, I keep visually going to the connected text balloon (yes maam... nothing yet) and skipping over Angela's response in the middle. Same at the end of the third panel. After Quinn's last balloon, I want to go to the connected balloon in panel 5 (let me show you something) instead of over to panel 4. I'm just pointing these out to help you think about positioning the balloons better so they're not as confusing. But I like the story so far, keep up the good work! And I hope you update more often!! :)
arteestx at 11:16AM, Jan. 20, 2009
I really enjoy your comic and you have a great sense of composition. My one complaint, however, is that the position of text balloons makes it difficult to read. I never know which balloon should be next. In the second panel, for example, I keep visually going to the connected text balloon (yes maam... nothing yet) and skipping over Angela's response in the middle. Same at the end of the third panel. After Quinn's last balloon, I want to go to the connected balloon in panel 5 (let me show you something) instead of over to panel 4. I'm just pointing these out to help you think about positioning the balloons better so they're not as confusing. But I like the story so far, keep up the good work! And I hope you update more often!! :)