Chapter 1 - pg. 10
Nicotine on March 3, 2009
A little late in the day, but here's page 3! XD
It took me awhile to color and I've been very busy this week, so that's why it wasn't up earlier. Sorry! But at least I made it today; I don't want to miss an update, even if I have to post late! ^^;
Things should pick up after this page. :D
@DAJB - haha, maybe it is the florist, shooting people with poisen ivy bullets. XD
@usedbooks - thanks! I've been trying to do some funky page layouts.
@taradaga - haha, the cheif's neck fat is fun to draw.
wildcard at 6:08AM, Sept. 7, 2010
Gah! Paparazi!
Kristen Gudsnuk at 1:29PM, March 15, 2009
chief, not cheif
ShinuZero at 3:54PM, March 9, 2009
Nice perspective in panel 3
DAJB at 2:03AM, March 5, 2009
Suggestion: when two speech balloons are far apart (like balloons 4 and 5 are here) you might want to consider [i]not[/i] joining them. Putting a separate tail on the second balloon will cover less of your artwork. Not a big deal. Just something to think about.
Doctor Shadow at 12:06AM, March 5, 2009
Nifty layouts for definite.
the2ndredbaron at 9:16PM, March 4, 2009
so what time period does this take place in, or is it set kinda out of time.
usedbooks at 7:53PM, March 4, 2009
Just a journalist doing what he does best -- jeopardizing police investigations! Or possibly the killer, admiring and documenting his work. Either way, I say tackle him!