TSOTBD- Ch. 0 P. 3
Unigirl on Aug. 30, 2007
Ok, I lied. NOW I'm happy with the text bubbles. Except the size of the text. I forgot to shrink the page before adding the text bubbles.
And I was thinking of adding some more neat effects to the portal, but I'm happy with it as it is. And it was supposed to be some writing on the portal, but I forgot to add it.
EDIT: 6/5-2009
Redone! Changed the composition dramatically, and gave the portal a little makeover.
Unigirl at 4:39AM, Jan. 12, 2009
What's wrong with this page is that the text was added before the page was resized instead of after as it's supposed to be. Besides, I'm going to redo the prologue too so it doesn't matter.
taltamir at 9:19PM, Dec. 30, 2008
nevermind, it isn't cursive at all, now that I get a better look at it.
taltamir at 9:18PM, Dec. 30, 2008
it looks very nice so far, but the test is way too small, its barely readable. I also recommend avoiding cursive font.