Chapter 1: The Journey 6
trevoramueller on Oct. 3, 2007
The final page of Chapter 1. I swear to you, the remaining 5 chapters are longer.
Although I had originally figured out the story before committing it to paper, I never did figure out the page count. Sometimes when writing, I'll make an outline with page numbers on it and a major event on that page - it helps to plan how many pages the story will take up, and where events should take place for maximum dramatic effect. I've done that with all of my projects that followed this one.
“Chapter 2: A Dream or a Memory” is right around the corner! See ya tomorrow!
T
trevoramueller at 4:27PM, Jan. 14, 2009
Moondog: I think bad guys should be jerks. However, the occasional kindness from a bad guy does tend to throw you for a loop. You've given me something to ponder....
Moondog at 10:48AM, Nov. 22, 2008
Those guys are jerks
trevoramueller at 9:43AM, Feb. 18, 2008
amanda: Hee hee hee...I'm totally going to use that when I make a comedy version of this comic. It'll happen. CoyoteLongshot: Frank Miller, eh? He's one of my influences artistically, so that would make sense. I like that the blood sticks out so much.
CoyoteLongshot at 1:36PM, Feb. 9, 2008
Heh... Decapitation always makes me laugh. The colored blood and gratuitous violence really gives this thing a Frank Miller-esque feel.
amanda at 4:23PM, Dec. 21, 2007
Haha PUN! They're taking matter into their own hands, har har. *ahem* ...sorry.
trevoramueller at 1:14PM, Oct. 16, 2007
Ah yes, the Bishops are a sweet-looking lot. They were some of the first designs that I came up with for this story. I especially like their face masks....
TheMidge28 at 9:01AM, Oct. 7, 2007
they're twins...hmm
Fitz at 12:57PM, Oct. 6, 2007
Oh, the guy(s) from your avatar! I was gonna ask about that. Not the nicest guys, either ;) But looking damn good!