Weave
ifelldownthestairs on Jan. 3, 2011
Happy New Year!
Yes, The Webcomic Review Comic on the Web is still alive and kicking (though Kev is still MIA!)
Thank you to Ochi for helping out this week.
I've had loads of volunteers to help with the next review, I don't know who I will pick to help yet, so if you want to take part please message me again (as I will forget people otherwise!)
Go over to the forum to give your thoughts.
My favourite page was this one.
(I forgot to ask Ochi her favourite….doh. I will get it from her and post it on the forum first chance I get!)
See you all next time!
dwrean at 5:44PM, Jan. 11, 2011
no offense to ochi's dinosaur, but on a second look it looks like a silly godzilla drawing mixed with barney. i love godzilla, and barney is the overlord of darkness. this thing must burn...
alwinbot at 10:32PM, Jan. 7, 2011
Ochi's dinosaur makes me laugh. Just staring at it.
Ochitsukanai at 3:22PM, Jan. 7, 2011
ergh, [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?cid=4835&tid=55298&comic_id=38096&p id=802121#802121]derp derp[/url]
Ochitsukanai at 3:22PM, Jan. 7, 2011
I agree that this review is quite short, so I posted a [url=http://www.drunkduck.com/community/view_topic.php?cid=4835&tid=55298&comic_id=38096&p id=802121#802121]way longer analysis[/quote] on the forum. SUPER TL;DR VERSION: I did [b]not[/b] dislike Weave, but found it difficult in places to understand.
I Am The 1337 Master at 6:06PM, Jan. 5, 2011
Lothar, lothar, lothar...IS NEXT.
Kroatz at 4:21PM, Jan. 4, 2011
Kudo´s to MeHighLow for taking criticism very well, and actually trying to improve! (And making a good comic of course...)
Bocaj at 2:53PM, Jan. 4, 2011
I agree with Larry.
MeHighLow at 2:50PM, Jan. 4, 2011
Ah, finally! Well, this does seem a little rushed by your usual review standards, but hey, it's better than nothing. So, regarding the criticism: it is hard for readers to get into and absorb a completely new world and I wanted to avoid long introductions and pages that do nothing but explain the setting. And it turned out hard for the storyteller, too! Ugh, I simply don't know what I could do better there, having the story I wish to tell in mind. The dialogue - your point stands and I already did a pretty significant rework, so as to make the story easier to follow. I believe it will do the trick. Also, I would like to know what were the segments that you found pretentious, so I can put more effort into reworking them. Maybe I should post this in the forum, it's getting too long already...
Canuovea at 2:39PM, Jan. 4, 2011
Hmm. Yes, I've read this one some time back I think. If I recall, I found it interesting. Also, the writing did not confuse me, but I suppose that may be more about me being me than anything else. Still, it isn't simple stuff and it does get confusing. As for the ages thing, yeah, seemed a bit odd, but I get the sense that they aren't quite as young as they appear. Anyway, I'll have to disagree with the review, I liked it.
Chernobog at 2:34PM, Jan. 4, 2011
Had a feeling this would be the determination. I'll add my thoughts on the forum later.
Larry at 1:26PM, Jan. 4, 2011
Wow, TWO puns?
RPGgrenade at 1:17PM, Jan. 4, 2011
glad to see you're back... hmmm, the review feels a bit... smaller than usual