hmm I didn't kbnow there was a update to this way did someone tell me????????Um 18903 I'm the one that goes crazy with stuff like that so don't do that please
Hey hey hey, nice to see another strip by you finally :-) although no reason not to crit it, so here goes...
1. Yup, the arm waves are horrible, but at least you can see that :-) So long as an artist can see the flaws in there own work, they'll push to improve.
2. The other characters seem to randomly appear from nowhere between panel 1 and 3, slightly odd, maybe they should have been stood more to the left.
3. I think you zoomed in a little too much on the guy in panel 4, he starts to lose form and begins to just look like random pixels, sadly sprites get a bit messy after you zoom in a little too much.
Other than that, it seems quite good, especially for a 4am comic, congrats, nice to see a sprite artist taking on crit and improving, makes mine and a lot of critters jobs worth while :-)
Oh and if anyone thinks 'OMG WUT?! HE SAY TINGS ARE WRONG WITH HER COMIC! I BE BIG BOY AND SHOUT AT HIM!!!1!!!!11111!' Please, give it a rest, it's been a long night, I don't want a spriter flying off the handle at me for giving my honest opinion. Thank you.
18903 at 4:03PM, Dec. 18, 2006
I have the same problem with him.
Quacklin at 3:56PM, Dec. 18, 2006
You Borat shut your sick*** face and from the gross comment you put on my comic I'll be watching you, you sick bastard.
18903 at 3:52PM, Dec. 18, 2006
soon I'll be in it.
18903 at 3:47PM, Dec. 18, 2006
I'm serious that will make mad and I'll make sure your reported this is not ponited to my friends because I can trust them.
18903 at 3:44PM, Dec. 18, 2006
thanks for understanding and hey. you guys that aren't my friends the first one says I'm gay will have to answer to me or my friends.
Quacklin at 3:39PM, Dec. 18, 2006
Fight over her?? Yeah shes that sweet, but I should be the only one going crazy. But yeah he is trying to be nice.
18903 at 3:34PM, Dec. 18, 2006
Yep why can't we be nice to each other let's not fight over Natalie.
Umbreon_Queen at 3:33PM, Dec. 18, 2006
Oh, quack, Michael's just trying to be nice
18903 at 3:16PM, Dec. 18, 2006
sorry I'm only looking out for my friend.
Quacklin at 3:12PM, Dec. 18, 2006
hmm I didn't kbnow there was a update to this way did someone tell me????????Um 18903 I'm the one that goes crazy with stuff like that so don't do that please
Anch0vy at 5:16AM, Dec. 17, 2006
Hey hey hey, nice to see another strip by you finally :-) although no reason not to crit it, so here goes... 1. Yup, the arm waves are horrible, but at least you can see that :-) So long as an artist can see the flaws in there own work, they'll push to improve. 2. The other characters seem to randomly appear from nowhere between panel 1 and 3, slightly odd, maybe they should have been stood more to the left. 3. I think you zoomed in a little too much on the guy in panel 4, he starts to lose form and begins to just look like random pixels, sadly sprites get a bit messy after you zoom in a little too much. Other than that, it seems quite good, especially for a 4am comic, congrats, nice to see a sprite artist taking on crit and improving, makes mine and a lot of critters jobs worth while :-) Oh and if anyone thinks 'OMG WUT?! HE SAY TINGS ARE WRONG WITH HER COMIC! I BE BIG BOY AND SHOUT AT HIM!!!1!!!!11111!' Please, give it a rest, it's been a long night, I don't want a spriter flying off the handle at me for giving my honest opinion. Thank you.
18903 at 10:12PM, Dec. 16, 2006
sorry I crossed the there I guess he was just having fun there.
18903 at 10:10PM, Dec. 16, 2006
NO this guy crossed the line when he put hooters on that thing nobody does that to my friends and get's away with it.
Umbreon_Queen at 10:06PM, Dec. 16, 2006
now settle down 18903 ^-^;
18903 at 9:55PM, Dec. 16, 2006
ok what the hell SqueakTheWhat you perverted little brat you picked the worng day to get on my nerves. why are so perverted?why do you like Natalie?
Umbreon_Queen at 9:17PM, Dec. 16, 2006
0_0
Umbreon_Queen at 12:41PM, Dec. 16, 2006
woops, double post
Umbreon_Queen at 12:24PM, Dec. 16, 2006
I dunno
Umbreon_Queen at 12:24PM, Dec. 16, 2006
I dunno
18903 at 12:13PM, Dec. 16, 2006
yay where?
Umbreon_Queen at 12:05PM, Dec. 16, 2006
you are
18903 at 11:56AM, Dec. 16, 2006
I hope I can be in this comic.
will123 at 1:12AM, Dec. 16, 2006
hahahaha lol!