Chapter 1: Page 4
TwilightPrincess90 on June 26, 2007
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To be toned.
So far, I think that this page is the best in terms of background and using more facial expressions. In this page you're able to see more of the relationship between Vincent and Luce and, boy is it rocky. Vincent really does not like Lucifer, I can't say the same for Luce though, I'm pretty sure that if he wouldn't get punched or kicked by Vincent he'd just glomp him over and over again.
mishi_hime at 12:27PM, Dec. 12, 2007
some the text is too tiny for my blind self to read.......*tear* the first panel of luce's face seems a little weird.. but other than that good work.
insanelysane at 10:19PM, June 26, 2007
rofl! nice twist!!